Reviews for Rite Of Passage

Reviews For: Rite Of Passage - Reviews: Page 1 of 10

little sis 11 11 2008-07-06 ch 28,	abusei lvoe it
bballgirl31 2008-07-04 ch 28,	abuseThis was a really great story! I'm very impressed!
little sis 11 11 2008-07-04 ch 4,	abuseILOVEIT
electricguitarsrockmysocks 2008-06-30 ch 28,	abuseHey, this was awesome! I really loved this. My mom's yelling at me, I have to go. But please keep writing, and the sequel thing is an awesome idea. Good luck!
PaMeLa22 2008-05-27 ch 28,	abuseI hope there will be a sequel i have read both of your stories and i love then keep up the good work
Jessica LaRae 2008-05-26 ch 28,	abuseI'm so glad I took the opportunity to read this story and it's prequel when I did. You are amazing, and when you get back from your break and you start the next story, I'll be there to read it!
waniphil 2008-05-24 ch 28,	abusewow. You did a really great job. Thanks a lot for giving us this wonderful story. Really, really... Yes, you deserve a break, right. But how about writing a one shot like Pony's mind on the way home in Darry's truck, please? I'm waiting. :D
Shannon Marie 2008-05-23 ch 28,	abuseI really enjoyed this story; The character changes, your writing style, the drama, everything really. I hope you do another sequal and I'll be looking for it with my fingers crossed. I won't forget you, and I'll be on the lookout for any other stories you may write in the future. You are a writer with great talent, and that is what makes people remember you. Good job. Shannon
AvatarKatara38 2008-05-23 ch 28,	abuseWonderful job! I enjoyed every chapter of this story. I would really love to read a sequel!
Mel49 2008-05-23 ch 28,	abuseFantastic! I loved this story. I'm going to miss it so much. I really like the character growth and the relationships. Very well written. Thanks so much. I'm keeping my fingers crossed for a sequel.
Caspar Rainbow 2008-05-23 ch 28,	abuseWOW! This was AMAZING, oh my god. I'm sorry I haven't reviewed often, and I know I said I would start, so I'm sorry I didn't really. You are a REALLY talented author and this was an awesome story. No grammar/spelling mistakes, no cliches, fabulous plot line, and the list goes on... Please, I beg of you, write a sequel to this story. I'm sure it will be just as great as the other two. I think that in this story and the first one, you really captured their point of views well and no one seemed out of character. Again, I hope you make a sequel, but you deserve a break. Remember to come back though! :) CR.
Erin Cade 2008-05-23 ch 28,	abuseHello. I haven't reviewed your stories once I don't think, so I have to try and fit god knows how many reviews into this one. I've been reading since you started You Can't Take It Back. I absolutely loved it, I thought it was brilliant. Every chapter was exciting and I often found myself on the edge of my seat. I was ecstatic when I found the sequal. You are the probably the best author on this site for updating. I thought the sequal was just as brilliant as the first. If not better. I have really enjoyed reading both of these fan fictions and I think you should definitely write a third. Just a quick question though. I never saw the tv show, and at what point in either stories did it get cancelled? What I'm asking is what parts of your fics are not from the tv show, and what parts are? Thank you so much for writing these fics and I hope to see a third. ~Erin
joesoap 2008-05-23 ch 28,	abuseLove the last words "waited to break the surface". I feel you really get inside Pony's head and I like the way not everything is resolved at the end. Yes please to a sequel. Please?
ronfanforever 2008-05-23 ch 28,	abuseMy thoughts are that this is one of the best fanfiction stories I've ever read. I really really hope that you do decided to do a sequel. I was really hoping we'd get to see Ponyboy get back and see the boys. Even a one-shot of Pony arriving home would be really great(but I'm still hoping for a sequel!) I could never forget you, you are an awesome author!!
xodamhsoirxo 2008-05-23 ch 28,	abuseI am so sorry I haven't been able to review; the days have been flying by faster than I knew they could. This story was really great though and I need to say it again, you are an amazing writer. So be proud of yourself :)

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