Your ending was perfect! I loved it!

that's a sweet one short story...
yami just start to fall in love toward yugi
i like it...
>.

That was sweet.:)

Oh, wow! This was so wonderful!

Personally, I think it has the potential to be continued. ^_^ I'm seriously addicted to your writing style.

~ Umbrae Calamitas

Live long. Live well. Write. Read. Dream.

This is lovely on so many levels. Awesome work!

How sweet! Your word choice is awesome. But dude, if someone was staring at me like that when I was sleeping... well, then they might see my drooling. But anyway. Cute!

This is awesome!! I love it!

Aww, this was so sweet and Yami was really in-character. I swear, puzzleshipping fic smake my world go 'round. Great work!

So sweet. Yami's confusion and caring show. I love it.

Loved it. It was cute

This was a great one shot, but you could make this into a two short or muilt-chapter story. You could make the next chapter from Yugi's pov and or make the one after that and over all pov. Not from Yugi's or Yami's just an over all. To show how Yami would go about protecting Yugi. Just an idea. As for it beinging a one shot, it was great. Keep it up for an other stories you are or might be writting.

Like the one shot! Nice description of a first meeting, between Yami and Yugi.

I...I loves you. Please, may I bear your children?

Beautiful story! I was moved to tears!!