Geeze, I read all these stories on my PSP and ALWAYS forget to comment later .o Not this time though XD

I really like the story so far. Love the concept, and you're great with setting the mood.

Hope to see more soon!

OOps, sorry it took me so long to review, I've been kinda busy x.x

Aww.. I was kinda hoping that Guntz would stay in the base a little longer, but from the looks of things, he's going to be back very soon! AS for the valuable item, now you have we wondering. My bets are on either one of his dads old artifacts, or the Hikari Sakura. Of course, I could be wrong.

As for pairing him up with OC's, I'm neutral to the idea; if it's done right I don't really mind if you do. Again, it's hard to tell where this is going at the moment, so I may not have to worry.

Damn, I have so many unanswered questions! Curse you and your mysterious storytelling...

Seems like some one's a bit of a flirt. lol jk

I look forward to the next chapter.

btw I'm not quite sure if you've noticed but there were a few gaps in random places. But what do I know you probably already knew that...right? O.o;

Why havn't I noticed this fic before? Probebly cause I'm an idiot.

Anyway, I'm loving what you've got so far, it's exremly well done. The first few chapters portrayed the hopelessness of the world superbly, whereas this last chapter presents a glimmer of hope.

I also love how the kids are the only ones with any kind of technology, it realy helps them to stand out against the backdroip of the city, and adds to the mystique.

Please do write more, I want to know who Ms. Claire is, and if she's somehow connected to the goddess Claire.

Y'Know, I like this story a lot. I like the first person narration from Guntz. But whatever happened to that lil' cabbit we all know? I suppose these will be answered later on. I'm guessing Nahatomb was the main villian in Klonoa Heroes? Just asking, 'cuz I've never played it. Anyway good story would like to see more of it soon!

Well...I like it. . please update soon.

Nice to see that you are still writing, although I'll be disapointed if Legend of Rebirth gets dropped.

This fic seems rather interesting. I would like to see how this goes...

Always a fan of Guntz angst and your stories in general. Joy. The funny thing is this is seemingly how Guntz usually acts so it's really hard to see the difference. Hah.

It's kind of obvious what happened to a certain someone since they weren't mentioned. To keep from spoiling anyone who might not have picked up I won't say the name. Have a habit of accidentally spoiling lately. :

Sodo: Yay!X3 I love it when you do Guntz' point of view!X3

Doma: Wow, i can't wait what comes next!8O