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| greenleafprince 2008-05-18 ch 5, | abusethis is really good ^^, so far keep it up :) . |
| Mystery001 2008-05-17 ch 5, | abuseWow, how did I not catch that you posted a new story? Anyway, I see you're trying something else than your usual tone of romance and humor. I like it, you execute it well and the flow of your writing is excellent. Keep up the good work Mel! -Myz |
| Shmeeko 2008-05-01 ch 4, | abuseSPiffy! I was gonna reveiw this this mortning, but I was a little rush ^-^ Awesome job. I'm not a big fan of Shadouge, but you manage to pull it off here, very subtle but definatley there. High-five to you! I"ll critique later, busy now. Keep posting! ^-^ |
| Shadrougeluver 2008-05-01 ch 2, | abuseyay!! great work mel! loved it! update soon ^^ TTYL! |