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| PirateCaptainBo 2008-05-01 ch 1,  | abuseBo: Haha! First reviewer! Yo! Sounds good so far. And you got a bounty hunter! Thats awesome. And a person with a unknown past she can't remember. Cooler Technology. Plus! People opposing the government! Though... we don't know if thats a good thing yet... its still opposing! Ski: ...*shakes head at Bo* Good job Cappy-chan! Advice is to put a 'author-note' at the top with a disclaimer. EC sounds very cool too. |