Very good story Even though Eevee is a very popular starter I found great originality in your story. That is until I read the motto, it is very clear it is a Rocket copy, lol. I even wrote one but now that you have one I gues Ill use it in a future story of mine. Cant wait for an update!

Well, well! Interesting origin for Eevee too, along with the abilities! That's new, in addition to Marina's part at the beginning!

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PS - Judging from my PM reply does that mean you're allowing us to submit OC profiles once again?

Woah, what a battle. Oh and just to clarify a couple of things. 1. Magneton cannot learn self-destruct, but it can learn Explosion which is even more effective. 2. Corsola is a Rock and water type pokemon, not a ground type. Ground types aren't affected by electric attacks so pokemon like Quagsire, Marshtomp, and Sandslash won't be affected by it. But pure rock types like Corsola and Sudowoodo CAN be damaged by electric attacks, but the damage isn't as severe.

Still, what Eevee was capable of is rather interesting. I can see why Jak's father sent him that particular one.

Hm, what to say? No offence, but not much originality when it comes to crims like Hydra, Deimos and Sneasel - seems almost a bit too much like a certain Rocket trio we know. Other than that, good to see that Marina's profile's up too!

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Wait, seven Cerulean sisters? You mean besides Marina you added two more? Can't wait to meet them.

Anyway, I'm still working on my trainer's profile but when I'm done I'll send you the update.

Me thinks it's almost like an re-enactment of Satoshi/Ash's predicament over Kasumi/Misty's bike all over again... hopefully, those two will get along! If eventually... after what happens next in the next chapter!

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Glad to see you update.This was a awesome chapter and I wish you luck in picking out pokemon and galactic motto.

Waterflower? Is Marina related to Misty and her sisters? BTW, do you still have the information on my OC for your fic?

An excellent chapter once again! And a new start to a journey too, along with a nice character profile!

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Another incredible chapter.I cant really say much other than incredible job.He now starts his adventure into the world. This just keeps getting more exciting.I cant remember the last time a story grasped my interest like this.Cant wait to see more!

ah, 14. The time when puberty is at its' worst, and when crazy adventures usually make the situation ten times worse. Interesting choice in starting pokemon...and 3 to boot. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter as well...

This is an awesome story! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Another exciting chapter! Certainly got a couple of interesting new additions to the character roster! Nice job!

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A wonderful chapter.This looks to be a great story with lots of detail and adventure.I really like it thus far please keep up the good work.Ive read many pokemon storys some that were good but got canceled and many bad ones.This one has an incredible storyline and looks like it has a incredibly bright future if the next chapters are as good as the ones youve written.I hope you keep up the good work.I will await your next update with great anticipation.

A new beginning, and a new character and Pokemon companion! Very promising I see here!

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