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Reviews For: The Next Day

dee 2008-06-19 ch 1, anon.	abusethis was good..you could have kept going.
astrakane 2008-06-09 ch 1,	abuseit totally not sucked !! hope you will wrote some more !
xFireSpritex 2008-06-06 ch 1,	abuseThat was perfectly sweet. I love Allison even more now.
Shrimpmeister 2008-05-12 ch 1,	abuseI can't see why you reckon it sucked - I thought it was very good! What you've managed to do is to get inside the character of all five, and show two things: 1) what we already know from the movie, and 2) an idea about how each would react to the actions of the other four the next day. It's believable, it's totally in character for the group, and it flows well. If you are keen to improve and expand, try picking some more random situations (both in and out of school, in and out of detention) and then think about how some or all of the characters would act. I've found this real helpful - especially when I keep the story short. Trying to get something meaningful into a couple of hundred words is a challenge, but it makes you focus, and that's a value just about every author on here would always benefit from - myself included. Anyway - real good one - I liked it a lot!
blizzy1106 2008-05-02 ch 1,	abuseit wasn't bad, dont worry about you being a beginner. we all start somewhere. keep going, i cant wait to see what happens
topaz addiction 2008-05-02 ch 1,	abuseI think I'd really like to see the rest of the fic! This chapter was intriuging. The way they're all saying hello and what not. But I'm confused as to why Alison is running away from Andy. Is it to test him?! I dunno. But I'd like to!
dangit 2008-05-01 ch 1,	abuseCan't wait to see what happens next. I like it, it doesn't suck. Please keep writing and update this story soon!
basketcase0405 2008-05-01 ch 1,	abuseooh i like it =] keep going!

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