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| Dragonrider99 2008-06-29 ch 26, | abuseNice job, man. Can't wait for the sequel. |
| Malchior The Draco 2008-06-28 ch 26, | abuseOk...I already figure out, who's who, but if you take Pinhead where I think you took him from, we might have a problem. If Pinhead is from Hellraiser, then we have no problem, but if Pinhead is from a different movie(Puppet Master), then we have a problem. And with that, all I really have to say is, "Sorry Jack, Chucky's back!" Jack: Huh?!?! Nevermind... |
| The Dude Of Doom 2008-06-28 ch 26, | abuseOkay I can guess where you got most of those villians exepte the two Bates...Anyway I have one day left before I have to leave again and I have one thing to say... Here's Freddy! |
| Malchior The Draco 2008-06-18 ch 25, | abuseSweet chapter, Man. GIVE THEM HELL! |
| kilnorc 2008-06-18 ch 25, | abusegood chapter dude! kickass fight |
| kilnorc 2008-06-17 ch 24, | abusewhoa, impact dials? when'd that happen? If you haven't explained that... (doesn't remember many details, lol), you might want to soon |
| The Dude Of Doom 2008-06-17 ch 24, | abusegood but rushed |
| Malchior The Draco 2008-06-17 ch 24, | abuseVery interesting chapter...I wonder where got the dials from. Gar: Most likely got from the same placing I get mine. Maybe...but I doubt he could swim to the bottom of to get them like you did. Gar: Baka! -he mutter as smack the author's forehead- Oi... |
| Malchior The Draco 2008-06-17 ch 23, | abuseNice chapter. I can't wait to see what going to happen next. Mal~ |
| kilnorc 2008-06-16 ch 23, | abusean interesting chapter, i'll say. however, i'm confused about the leopard thing...there's only one and that's lucci, and i have a fruit that looks very similar to that, but haven't introduced it yet...so what da hell? secondly, I've already used Neko Neko no Mi, Model: Tiger in my series...with that guy's DF, it'd be like Neko Neko no Mi, Model: WHITE Tiger |
| Malchior The Draco 2008-06-15 ch 22, | abuseNot bad chapter, but to tell you the truth, I was hoping for a better battle between the two. Anyhoo, keep up the great work and I look forward reading the next chapter. |
| Malchior The Draco 2008-06-15 ch 21, | abuseNot bad chapter, but for the future it's Malchior "the Draco" to the World Government. To his friends it's either Draco, Mal, or Senor Scaly-butt. Malchior: HEY! And to his his nakama it's basical the same as his friends, but he also know as Raco. So in the future, remember the Government's dogs call him Malchior "the Draco", but anyhoo, great job and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Mal~ |
| kilnorc 2008-06-15 ch 22, | abuseeh, personally, it seems a bit too rushed for a fight against a CP9, especially against Jyabura. But, that's just me. |
| kilnorc 2008-06-15 ch 21, | abusehm, interesting that these guys have returned and done all that...personally, i like creativity and such, and i won't say anything bad, i'm sure some ppl would say that already, lol...-sighs- sorry, random. |
| The Dude Of Doom 2008-06-14 ch 21, | abuseGood chapter...thou...I still don't see why for some reason people can't get somethings about Endo and Death Root right. Here's what I mean Endo and all the members of the ex-Living Tree Pirates are 'dead'. Death Root is made up of the same people thou no one exepte people who met Endo or a member of his crew know he use to be 'Death Tree' Endo. His bounty poster now as the leader of Death Root is like this. (picture of a blood covered man with a demonic wooden, spike covered arm. The picture is blurry, same as all of the other Death Root members pictures) Root Leader of the Death Root Merc's Bounty: (Not reveiling yet...thou this is after Pompeii) A question...when is this locatied in time. because at the end of LotA by Rayo, Rayo (the charater) thinks in his head, that he knows Kodji is JUST entering the grandline. Based a month or two after Rayo' story..which is a month after Draco's crew, Axe-Head's, and Straw-Hats where there. Anyway great chap. |