Reviews for Born without Air

Reviews For: Born without Air

Callisto Ondreas 2008-07-05 ch 1,	abusethis is a very well written piece of non-fiction? yes? ok... i, too know how it feels to loose someone. just know that even if you never see that someone again, they will always love you. they are in you and in everyone you see forever. My aunt lou, for instance. i see her in my mother, even though they weren't related, and i see how much she loved us. so don't ever think that they are gone forever, because they are with you. forever and always.
Flame Rising 2008-05-22 ch 1,	abuseLet’s play a game, shall we? Yes? Fantastic. This game is called “Things That Can Write Better Than You”. The rules are simple. Please correctly select which choice can write better than you: A. My left testicle B. A toilet-full of chunky diarrhea C. An inbred midget clown who swims in choice B D. All of the above If you chose the correct answer, D, then you have won the following prize: A spot in my coveted C2 “Stories A Turd Out of My ** Could Write Better” (which, strangely enough was not one of the choices). Don’t despair! Even if you didn’t choose correctly, I will be kind enough to give you that prize anyway. Who said I don’t have a heart? Congratulations! Please continue to avoid the dictionary as if it were an oozing, puss-filled sore on an old hooker’s a.s.s. And good grammar? Well, run away from it like it’s a festering syphilitic itch you just can’t scratch in public. Or in words you can understand: your fic sucks donkey balls, and that’s what you wanted me to think, right? Because otherwise, I’d have to believe this was an actual attempt at writing and laugh the crap right out of myself. Best regards, F/R
CattyCat 2008-05-01 ch 1,	abusePut it under fictionpress . com (without the spaces) for stories that aren't based off already copyrighted material. It would get better reviews and people won't get mad at you for posting here.

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