I had a feeling Jasona was going to be pregnant all along. I really liked this story. It had its good plot line and climax, and the ending was very bittersweet. That's the best kind of ending.

XoXo OxOx,
~.~Fern

Col, Snape's ALIVE!

Dang it! You had to go and kill him off, didn't you! Now I'm bawling and it's all your fault. That was by far the best chapter of the whole story, despite you sending Severus back to his painting. I liked that he has a son now. That was a great story and I'm sorry it's over.

Great unraveling of the mystery. What a cool concept. Great chapter.

Oh, that was heart wrenching reading Severus' thoughts on Jasona and why she was avoiding him. I'm glad they're going after Blair together. At least he caved in for that. If only they would just talk to one another. Good chapter.

Oh wow. You went from such elation to such hatred, all in one chapter! I loved it. I do hope they can come to an understanding of one another soon though. She should be up front with him about what she thinks he thinks about her. You know what happens we we assume.

Wow, that was an amazing chapter. So much went on. And the end. Hurry and update again so we can find out what happens.

I like the start you have here, though I wonder if the romance is going too fast. A pity Snape let the boy get the better of him, but I wonder what Blair is going to do now? Will he just run or will he go to his father for help? And how did the father get hold of the ball and learn to use it? I look forward to finding out.

Oh cool! You brought him back from the dead! Interesting relationship between him and Jasona. Will there be an explanation about why they are so attracted to each other so quickly and completely?

What an interesting premise for a story. Can't wait to see why Severus made the device and exactly what it does.