I was crying, I loved it, I have never played the game, but that story was wonderful. I was crying because I accutally thought that Xel-chan and Lina-chan where dead. I love it, please write a sequal.

I must say that i just stated reading this story and it seem to be good. I have to say though that you is a bit odd. I would have pick Xellos to be Nash and Gourry to be Alex. Don't worry Xel/Lin or Gourry/Lina are both good.

This is the best thing I'm reading right now. The perfect combination of my favorite video game & favorite anime! The only thing I would've added would be the singing deal right before the Blue Dragon Shrine. Looking forward to the next chapter!

good chapter though much to short! Please please please write more soon!

p.s hope your life gets better.

You -really- dropped the ball on the casting for this one. I mean, wow.

Not a bad story, but how did Xellos get Alex's part? Not that I don't like Xellos, but he's a Mazoku.

you wrote more! Yay thank you! Please write another chapter.

Nah...you won't be losing me as a reader for deleting Gourry. In fact I'm glad.