Nice Blade Refference

There was so much beauty in this last chapter, I actually cried in this chapter. Saddest episode yet, but so very very beautiful, good work.

Kim as a 'vampire' great idea, explaining it with science was great becuase if Walter did some spell it wouldn't be the same, but since her side effects (such as the sun) were part of the serum, it made sense. Oh, the pain that Ron went through in this chapter was so hard, I could imagine the torture that was going through him as he battled his love.

Walter is a douche, just had to say that.

This was a beautiful Episode and sort of makes up for the Shego thing *fist wave* SORT OF.

Keep writing

-Raven

This was not bad in general, and I really liked ron's meta joke about not going evil more than once in a season... as well as Kate's curious and sudden warming up to Ron; but blade? you just about had me closing the story and not coming back on that pointless interlude.

boy I hope olivia and the others actually got out of that building. am curious where you're taking the super vampire kim, since I did one of my own recently

Great Story

Well, you've definitely got the bittersweet ending down in this episode. I imagine the things Kim said to Ron will put something of a strain on there relationship for a while. Interesting to see the Canadians again, I can definitely see Kim and Kate being related. Thought Blade confronting Kim was a little out of left field though.

Walter was so convinced Kim was always right that he was willing to plunge the Earth into permanent darkness, conveniently missing that the new Kim clearly had no interest in saving the world. Someone should mention to him that a fanatic is someone who redoubles his efforts while losing sight of his goal.

Nice to another Bonnie free episode, guess she's off collecting more villains (pity about Shego, she was always an interesting character). Keep up the good work!

A touching end to what was mostly an action story. It was a very nice touch.

On to the next story.

So the duel goes well for the good guys, and the serum is cleared from Kim. But does that mean that everything is back fine and good?

Eagerly awaiting more!

Kate and Dr. Director against an army of henchmen. Not a good sitch to be in.

Ron versus Kim, sword versus sword. Don't know how this sitch is gonna be solved at all.

Eagerly awaiting more!

Walter is in for a rude awakening I think, based on Olivia's explanation.

Eagerly awaiting more!

A bit of a Blade crossover? A bit much, isn't it? Of course, then Kim wouldn't get the sword.

Looks like Walter's plans aren't working so hot right now.

Eagerly awaiting more!

Uh oh, hunger is never a good thing... unless it's in the bedroom, but that's a completely different sitch.

Kate is really not loving the comparisons, is she. lol

Eagerly awaiting more!

A vampire? Oh man, I just thought he gave her a happy drug so he'd have the slimmest chance with her. This is so not good.

Ron is so gonna kick Walter's butt completely, it won't even be funny.

Eagerly awaiting more!

Looks like everyone is gathering, but what's going on with Kim. I know you had to bring the players in play, but that's cruel. lol

Eagerly awaiting more!

Nice ending!

I tell you, this whole series is the best "S5" fic I have ever read.