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| -Pretty.Pretty.Butterfly- 2008-07-24 ch 6,  | abuselike it so far, please update soon. =) |
| mhx3 2008-07-12 ch 6, | abuseSo, so good. Update soon, please? |
| morningstar67 2008-07-10 ch 6, | abuseOh my, another good chapter. I love how you move the story along. |
| Frust-sheep 2008-07-10 ch 6, | abuseOh I love it so much. Thank you for the fast update. Great scene, it is so bad that Jason did not remember till now. But I hope he do sometime. Please write more. You do a wonderful job here. |
| LiasonFan2 2008-07-10 ch 6, | abuseACK! He's remembering yay too bad Marie isn't telling him a thing.. sigh How I adore this story! |
| Suzy87 2008-07-10 ch 6, | abuseWoW! Love it! I hope there's more like this one in the future! I like how you write Marie and that's something! Believe me I hate her character! LOLOL Is this going to be a AU Supremacy or you're going to write Jason/Nicky interaction just like it happen in the movie! Update Soon! Very Soon! Congratulations! |
| Stefanie 2008-07-10 ch 6, anon. | abuseAwesome chapter. When will you get to the opening events in Supremacy when she dies and he travels to Germany to kill Landy? I am anxiously awaiting the moment when he sees her through his scope and pulls away. That should be the EUREKA moment of your story. His enlightening or epiphany if you will. Update soon. |
| texamich 2008-07-10 ch 6, | abuseYour Jason and Marie are a fresh take. Their emerging personalities show traits original to your story. We might need more supporting details to believe some of them. The more detail you supply, the more real it can become for the reader. |
| texasgrrl 2008-07-10 ch 6, | abusewow this is really good! i hope you continue with this story its definatly worth the effort |
| LiasonFan2 2008-07-08 ch 5, | abuseOMG! Now that was a twist I didn't expect at all, a baby but stillborn how sad and only Nicky remembers... Poor her.. |
| graviola 2008-07-08 ch 5, | abuseoh the child was stillborn!!So sad! I'm more and more curious... they are going to meet again? To Jason to find out he had a child and such a serious relationship should be beyond shocking. Is he going to remember something? Ah did you hear the rumours about a fourth movie? I hope its true. |
| Frust-sheep 2008-07-08 ch 5, | abuseOh yes, yes, yes two chapters. I was so happy to see, that you updated 2 chapters at once. *joy* :) Thank you so much. I really can imagine, that Marie and Jason had this conversation very often. Anyway awesome dialog! The next chapter was very surprising for me. I had not expect that scene with the clinic and I love the idea with the postcards. But the last sentence made me cry. Nicky lost their baby and Jason, too. Oh poor girl. *sniffle* *sniffle* Altogether I love the two chapters, so please update ASAP, because I can`t wait for more. :) |
| Peggy 2008-07-08 ch 5, anon. | abuseThis is a nice plot to pursue (the Jason/Nicky back story is definitely plausible with what we got from Ultimatum), but as much as I'm enjoying this, I think it'll be better structured if you got a beta/editor. Thanks for sharing and can't wait for more! |
| morningstar67 2008-07-07 ch 5, | abusesnif snif. It makes sense though. Hard to be on the run when you have a child. I am so happy that you updated. i just simply love this story. |
| mhx3 2008-07-07 ch 5, | abuseWow. Amazing. I absolutely love this story. Please continue very soon. |