I hope that you keep this up.

intersting!

This was fantastic until you mentioned Angel that guy is a pedophile stalker, sneaking around at night talking to 15-16

year old girls I don't care if she is a slayer. If a creepy guy was doing that would it be romantic?

Man OH MAN! If Buffy keeps up her training like this, we could see something that I never thought that we would see: A SUPER SLAYER! One who has the strength of a Super Sayian, and the skills of a Slayer! And that is saying something. Willow, she is showing her teachers something that they never realized: She has the potential to be something more powerful than they are! Giles, I look forward to seeing what he and Nightblade can do. And X-Man, if what he did with Hyena today was any indication, he is going to be one VERY tough Hombre!

Keep up the good work, and I look forward to the next chapters.

I don't care that there was three months between updates, I'm Just so happy that you updated!

WOW! A fourth generation decendent of one of the GREATEST Martial Arts fighters is going to be training Buffy and Xander? This is FANTASTIC! And with that tail, he could possibly meet his ancestors level of SS4! I can hardly wait to see what all this training is going to mean for Xan man, Red, B, and G Man.

:-).

But Goku is strong enough to rip a hole in the universe doncha know? and possibly blow up da entire thing too.

Sounds like things are about to get VERY interesting! And I wonder if, while Buffy and the gang are away getting training, if Faith will show up. She could use a good workout on the Hellmouth.

So I finally get to see more for this fic!

HAPPY DAY!

Writing this as I read it, cause your chapter are

very long!

Really don't like alot of this. I don't think you're

doing some parts very well at all. Like the fact that they keep dying again and again. Mentally, how could they cope with that. Buffy kill Xander 3 times, to shup him up? Her excuses for that were complete BS. I'm guessing you don't like Xander very much. When they're forced to kill each other so much I guess they can't really be friends, well not as good as they were before. If their interaction with each other and how they deal with hacing to kill each other improves, this story might improve, cause they all feel emotionally stunted.

Xander finally got to beat Buffy! yeah! Stupid cow

got what she deserves! :D I don't think he should

feel guilty, Buffy's killed him 3 times for nothing

and backstabbed him!

Now it's back to super Buffy again, stronger chi than

'warrior x', ugh.

I really miss this fic, is it finished or hopefully you'll continue it again later?

But All you fics are great so just do what you do.

please more more MORE

Well I must Admit I was surprised, in a nice way. Usually any fanfic involving dragon ball is a total waste of time but yours is nice.

Two personal objections:

Buffy/Xander ew

I think you should put a warning in your summary of the smaller one so people know where the current version is.

(Semi)Professional Critique:

(Note that I wasn't reading the 'Champions of the universe version' in fact I did not know there was another version untill I read the old one.)

1. It feels like you have a tendency to rush things at times. Like you are in a hurry to get somewhere with the story.

2. The characters keep having jumps in power levels, which is plauzible within the Dragon Ball universe, but you skip on the scenes that explain why. (Like the one with willow going to Wiccan level. I'm sure it must have been a grand scene.)

Keep up the good work and remember. You as the author know much more background then is put in the story. Make sure to tell us what we need to know...