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| otaku no baka 2008-06-27 ch 1, | abuserandom and short, but hey it was something new and besides minor grammar errors it was actually not bad at all. it's like a pwp in a way :D |
| Shirae Natrice 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abusepretty good, it just felt too short. i mean i know Eagle cleans house pretty fast, but you just need a little more length. that is my only complaint. otherwise rock on! |