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| animesweetie 2008-05-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseYeup. Definitely angsty. Haha, very cliche, telling him she loves him right before he dies |
| kaname's harisen 2008-05-07 ch 1,  | abuseWhat a beautiful moment you captured here! It was dark and sad, just as you warned, but it was full of heart. You always amaze me with how you can create such a complete, complex scene with so few words. Very well written. It's too bad that Tenten still blamed herself in the end, though I think most people in the same situation would react the same way. |
| HimeHikari 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuse*cries* |
| Katako-Chan 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abuseWow. Dark, but absolutely gorgeous. These short little one-shots are what make me remember why I love NejiTen so much. Amazing. Katako-Chan |
| Ally1313 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuse-SNIFF- This was so sad but so...beautiful... The ending line was wonderful, I loved it! |
| violaqu33n 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abusethis is very well written, and very in character but it was extremely predictable like, i knew the ending when i read the first paragraph |
| coconut.mandarin 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseSad. |
| JanuaryFriend 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseVery dark, and sad, and yet incredibly beautiful. I don't know that anyone has ever pulled off a character death the way you did. And the angst on Tenten's part. Wow. The whole thing was excellent, and I congratulate you. |
| .Gabby-chan182. 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abusemm, angsty! Yumm^^ Lol, bittersweet and nice^^ -Gabs. |
| angelaH 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseI'm speechless. Gah. That was beautiful, but sad indeed. :( |
| Quiet Moon 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuse-quiet applause- Very well done, NessieGG-san. The last line of this was a very good ender. It just closed this up with a sense of haunting, one that just puts foreboding into you, but with its circumstances, just a calm acceptance as well. Yeah...it's really something that makes you think, 'what if'. It really does make you think of all the possibilities of one little action that can completely change the tide of events. It doesn't quite make me sad, but more...contemplative, I suppose. Dark elements tend to do that to me, I suppose. |
| Roses of Sharon 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is beautiful! Its not actually that dark, I think, but its hardly happy, so perhaps you are justified in saying that it is a dark fic. It was a little slower than I think your fics usually are, which made it a little more difficult for me to pay attention, but I think it was a little bit sweet and a little bit good, and rather pretty. Good job! (Oh, and, by the way - first reviewer!) |