Well, you said it was depressing at the beginning and you were right! But it was well written. Not a long fic, just a one-shot, but it didn't feel rushed at all, which is the main fault of one shots. It felt complete when it finished, rather than unfinished and leaving the reader craving another chapter. Which I'm grateful for - I'm SUPPOSED to be studying for my finals now. So this was a nice short break. Great fic!

wow i love this a lot. :) youre so talented

Yeup. Definitely angsty. Haha, very cliche, telling him she loves him right before he dies

What a beautiful moment you captured here! It was dark and sad, just as you warned, but it was full of heart. You always amaze me with how you can create such a complete, complex scene with so few words. Very well written. It's too bad that Tenten still blamed herself in the end, though I think most people in the same situation would react the same way.

*cries*

Wow. Dark, but absolutely gorgeous. These short little one-shots are what make me remember why I love NejiTen so much.

Amazing.

Katako-Chan

-SNIFF-

This was so sad but so...beautiful...

The ending line was wonderful, I loved it!

this is very well written, and very in character
but it was extremely predictable
like, i knew the ending when i read the first paragraph

Sad.

Very dark, and sad, and yet incredibly beautiful. I don't know that anyone has ever pulled off a character death the way you did. And the angst on Tenten's part. Wow. The whole thing was excellent, and I congratulate you.

mm, angsty! Yumm^^ Lol, bittersweet and nice^^

-Gabs.

I'm speechless.

Gah. That was beautiful, but sad indeed. :(

-quiet applause- Very well done, NessieGG-san. The last line of this was a very good ender. It just closed this up with a sense of haunting, one that just puts foreboding into you, but with its circumstances, just a calm acceptance as well. Yeah...it's really something that makes you think, 'what if'. It really does make you think of all the possibilities of one little action that can completely change the tide of events. It doesn't quite make me sad, but more...contemplative, I suppose. Dark elements tend to do that to me, I suppose.

Wow, this is beautiful! Its not actually that dark, I think, but its hardly happy, so perhaps you are justified in saying that it is a dark fic. It was a little slower than I think your fics usually are, which made it a little more difficult for me to pay attention, but I think it was a little bit sweet and a little bit good, and rather pretty. Good job!

(Oh, and, by the way - first reviewer!)