Oh, I like it! Interesting concept!! Thanx for reviewing my story! You rock! I like this story so far, so update soon!

Cool!Please continue soon!...Oh dang I just sat on my cell phone!I hope I didn't break it!

very nice story!please continue soon!

nice...new...interesting premise...update SOON! :)

cool, really like it. Now is the James the james we know from POC or another one? Or are we going to have to see.

Keep writing.

Oh! This second chapter was magnificent! I loved the interaction between these two! =]

I think your story is awesome! :) I hope next chapter has more Jack in it! Anyways, I love how Naida bites Jack's hand. XD Update soon!