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Reviews for: Heartburn
sheruchan
2009-10-05 . chapter 1
Loved the last line. Summed up everything perfectly. I can totally imagine their relationship really being like this. Beautifully written, just beautiful. Tragic one-sided love, aah.
crystalwolfberri
2009-09-07 . chapter 1
oh this is just crazy. I love it. I adore it. this fic is so amazing and I like it a lot. the way you've written Klavier, I feel as though this is who he really is and why he actually likes Ema. ah, beautifully written and too cute. (:
wooden
2009-08-25 . chapter 1
That last line was genuis.
Bespectacled
2009-08-15 . chapter 1
Utterly gorgeous and wonderful and oh <3
Xhanthia
2008-10-05 . chapter 1
I don't know if I've reviewed this before...if I have, well...oh well.

Every time I read this, I'm struck by how well-written and how powerful the rhetoric is. I'm a sucker for Klavier/Ema, and seeing a story as amazingly written as this one has has the power to keep me grinning for days at a time. Also, the last line is quite possibly one of the best lines I've read on .
Concetta
2008-07-27 . chapter 1
Oh, my gosh, that was beautiful and insightful, that it bordered on poetic!

Ciao!
Nips
2008-07-11 . chapter 1
... Dammit. That last line is too sweet. Canonically, there's not much evidence for the Klavier/Ema coupling, but the angle of attraction that you've found for Klavier (Ema's passion) makes it totally believable. Great job.
Lord Batpig
2008-07-01 . chapter 1
Very cute, and I enjoy the fact that it's not a mutual obsession. Ema really is something else, a totally different breed of woman than Klavier is used to dealing with. Thanks for keeping that in mind and sharing such a fun read with us.
smileysquirrels
2008-06-07 . chapter 1
This is beautifully written. I love the figurative language.
Firey Chronicles
2008-05-26 . chapter 1
good job
eck
2008-05-05 . chapter 1
...8D

TrucyDoll
2008-05-03 . chapter 1
This is one of the best KlavierEma fics I've ever read, if not THE best. Excellent job.

The last line was my favorite part
Pureauthor
2008-05-02 . chapter 1
Aw, that was kinda adorable, and a bit of a change from the usual humourous KxE pairing. What really sealed the deal for me was the very last line.

Good work.
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