loving the intraspective stuff here. and Kristoph was so sad, hm? :( but really good story!

Beautifully written!

Yeah, I definitely see why Klavier would have identity problems. I seriously thought he and Kristoph were the same person when those first promo pictures came out. I like how you bring up Klavier's conflict with something as trivial as a haircut and present the pros and cons in a way that doesn't insult the audience. I know that it's hard to trust readers to understand things on their own sometimes... In this case, you did a great job. Respecting a reader's intelligence can make the writing itself seem more intelligent.

Glimmer-boy is the perfect Ema-term for Klavier, the name's completely stuck in my head!

no klavier can't get a haircut! hehe I think phoenix did cheat. great fic!

NICE STORY!! i like the part of the pool game, you portrayed very well their personalities!