He took you. I hate him, was used way to often then called for. I understand what you were trying to say, but you said it so much where you wanted to say, "okay, let's get on with the story." Another thing, Yui and Miaka were great friends that honestly loved each other...but not like that. There wasn't even one hint in the story that Yui felt for Miaka in that kind of way. I understand you wanting a challenge, but maybe next time you should pick a challenge that is also accurate with the story.

Now that was a side of Yui that I never thought of, but that is *incredibly* plausible. I loved how you conveyed that much emotion in her words, and I loved that you showed some of her disdain for the other characters. And I really loved the reasoning behind her wanting to break up Tamahome and Miaka. Very cool fic! And awesome, awesome writing! -

Dood. I love you for writing this fic. Miaka /is/ a baka for never seeing how plainly in love with her Yui was. People who say otherwise just don't want to admit that when you love someone enough you can and will hurt them out of jealousy toward their chosen and anger and the bitter pain of rejection without even ever having asked. So.. lovely.

Yay! I love Yui! She's so cool in the anime and she kicks butt in the manga! Too bad Miaka-baka can't be like her! I don't think she would like Miaka tho. She's too smart for that! More FY fics please! Like Tasuki fics!

Beautiful, I am a Yui/Miaka shipper and this is sooooo...good! Write more!_

On the other hand, 'Baka Arysa and Demeter ' is a perfect example of what I would call a 'typical' Fushigi Yugi watcher. Just think about it...Yui had been Miaka's friend for a decade beforethese events and...I'm not gonna get into it_ Again, keep up the good workp

(If that was corny, sorry, but I luv it[the ficcie that is] *_*)

You're so stupid to think that the only reason Yui hated Miaka is because of their friendship. It's more than that and if you tried to analyze Yui's character more, you can see how little faith she had shown on her friend as well as how little she value her friendship with Miaka. Her hate got her friend almost killed on several occassions and if she truly loves Miaka as you would like to put it, then she could have considered how she put Miaka's life in peril by siding with the Seiryuu. Do you think that if Yui really cared about her friend that much, that she would consider putting Miaka in danger? No sirree ! What an idiot you are !

I LOVE THIS! I really do, this is super. I had to skip over some of the repetition though ... baka Miaka .

I love the way that you portray Yui in this fic! She is so cool! The repetition was very effective too. Very original and really fun to read. FY needs more yuri fics!

Beautiful shoujo ai! Haven't seen one of these in a while.