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stranded chess piece 2008-05-13 ch 10,	abuseAw that was fantastic! And really really great effort for a first fic- yeah writing fanfic is pretty addictive, but loads of fun :) Thanks for such a great read. Your writing is lovely. This could easily have been an episode, because it was so original. Well done!
stranded chess piece 2008-05-13 ch 7,	abuseOh poor Doug, I feel so sorry for him. He's having such a rough time. I love your writing! This story is full of great twists so far :)
stranded chess piece 2008-05-13 ch 6,	abuseOh no!! I can't believe he just did that! This story just keeps getting better. I can't tell you enough how much I'm enjoying it :)
stranded chess piece 2008-05-13 ch 4,	abusesorry I haven't reviewed each chapter- I didn't want to stop reading. This is so good! Brilliant idea, really well written, clear language, dialogue and characters. Great job so far :) Okay I'm off to read the rest...
stranded chess piece 2008-05-13 ch 1,	abuseI'm so excited I've finally started reading this- been wanting to read it for ages! This is a promising beginning. I love the McQuaids, they're awesome. And you've nailed their characters completely :)
Ghostwriter 2008-05-06 ch 10,	abuseAwesome job. Catch ya on the flip side.
Hanson's Angel 2008-05-06 ch 1,	abuseMy God, this story has everything. . .great plot, Hanson torture, the McQuaids, Penhall being, well, Penhall -- and you wrote it so quickly (and well, I might add) -- how did you do it? Loved it -- wish I'd read it in a more timely manner but that's ok, now I can go back and keep rereading it at my leisure. . .please tell us you have more Jump Street fan fic in the pipeline. . .Hanson/Penhall in particular : )
firebunee 2008-05-05 ch 10,	abuseYou did so well for your first time out! Thanks for posting and keep it up. I think that these stories are a great way to work out some aggression without beating up your hubby, LOL!! Hope to read more from you soon!
andaere 2008-05-05 ch 10,	abuseAw, sweet ending. Finally, I'm actually happy with an ending! (I hate endings.) Good job. =) You write so well, and also in character. It's nice to have Tom back. You also come up with good ideas... Have you come up with any more? -hint hint nudge nudge- xD Write more! You definitely have talent!
procol harum 2008-05-05 ch 10,	abuseit's over? aw. great story, and I loved this chapter and how there was humour, ending the story on a happy note. And I am so glad that Tom is, well, Tom, as much as I love the mcQuaids. And, of course, that he's alright now. Great job, hope you write some more :D
andaere 2008-05-05 ch 9,	abuseAww. This is adorable. Poor, poor Tom. It's insane how many people in this fandom love to see Tom suffer (including me). xD Yay! He got his memory back! His little thinking-he-was-a-McQuaid thing was nice but I wouldn't want it to be full-term. =) Update soon! I know you will. I just love how much and how fast you update! =)
debbiets 2008-05-05 ch 9,	abuseYou're doing a good job with this story, I'm really enjoying it. And thanks so much for the quick updates, they are appreciated. I for one would be very happy if you decided to make writing Jump Street stories your new hobby!
procol harum 2008-05-05 ch 9,	abusegreat job, and I love protective Doug not wanting Tom to be alone :D
procol harum 2008-05-04 ch 8,	abuseaww yay Tom :D I am so glad he is okay, and that he has his mmemory back. One thing, though: in the 6th paragraph from the bottom Doug says, "Stay away Tom." I think you mean awake but great chapter, and can't wait for more. And I would be happy if you made a hobby and wrote more stories :D
andaere 2008-05-04 ch 7,	abuseWhoa, Tom just keeps getting into trouble... Poor guy... I don't think he can take any more hits to the head... ;) I just wanna say that it's an absolutely brilliant idea for Tom to think he's Tom McQuaid. =) AAH! CLIFFHANGER! Please, update soon!

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