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Serenity Rain 2008-07-26 ch 12,	abuseaw. Max=REJECTED. poor thing.
TakeMeOrLeaveMe2010 2008-07-12 ch 5,	abuseWHOA...wasn't expecting that at all. "Does it have sentimental value? Did your dead grandmother give it to you on her deathbed? Is that why you want it back so bad?" "I don't know, from the back your ** read something along the lines of Teresa or Melanie or something." I was lol-ing for several minutes at these particular lines. Good Job. I know some people hate this, but I love the initial hate which turns to love relationships. =D Well, this story certainly got juicier, so I'm going to keep reading now.
TakeMeOrLeaveMe2010 2008-07-12 ch 4,	abuseWell, not quite EVERY chapter...xD Oh, I liked this one a lot, particularly Michelle getting starstruck and Sadie being all "whatever." Is it too horrible of me that I find it amusing Max had to emotionally dig really deep just to shave off a mustache? Like in that "aww...you poor thing" kind of way? Hopefully that paragraph wasn't intended to make me feel heartbroken, if it was...sorry. And the whole hat-stealing thing was HYSTERICAL. And so Max. That boy can steal my hat any day xD Enough of my dirty thoughts.
TakeMeOrLeaveMe2010 2008-07-12 ch 2,	abuseI lied. I probably will review every chapter ;D. While I liked this chapter too, and the wonderful backstory, I envisoned Max saying what Michelle was saying and vice versa. He kind of lost that arrogance and carelessness that makes him Max, but then again, he seems pretty smitten with Michelle and he probably has less of that arrogance and carelessness after the war. I think I just contradicted myself, which must make this horribly confusing xD. I'm going to shut up now, and read the next chapter. =D
TakeMeOrLeaveMe2010 2008-07-11 ch 1,	abuseI really don't know why I haven't read this yet, but I guess now I'm finally getting to it. That was a wonderful first chapter =D I always sort of envisoned Lucy being a tad like Mrs. Carrigan, but most people don't add that aspect into their fic, so I'm glad you did. Well, you've got me hooked, so I'm going to keep reading now, and hopefully not review every chapter xD.
Bookish0278 2008-06-25 ch 10,	abuseI thought this was very good, and I can't wait for more! I want to see how thier relationship works, and are you going to go the "present" soon? That may be an interesting synamic, how thier relationship developed, and how it became what it was, post-ATU. Update soon!
Bookish0278 2008-06-16 ch 9,	abuseI like how Max makes it easy to trick Clarissa, and other idiots like her, i like the back and forth dialogue, it was very entertaining. I loved it!
K.D. Sparrow 2008-06-04 ch 8,	abuseooh intense. Great story! I really like it so far, update soon!
Bookish0278 2008-06-04 ch 8,	abuseoh, a flashback, how very interesting. his dream was creepy, but it does show that he thought about he, even with all the other girls he has been with. He has a crush in her. I liked this chapter. Angtsy, and somwhat darker, but gettin' better all the time. =) I do that a lot, it's annoying, but I can't help it. update soon! Bookish0278
Asthetic 2008-06-03 ch 8,	abuseMax really makes me happy for some reason. =3 Just to say. Anyway, Michelle's character in this was really good in that nightmare. Sort of reminded me of the Green Fairy from Moulin Rouge. Tempting, but very deadly. Fantastic Job.
Serenity Rain 2008-05-29 ch 7,	abuseAww, I'm so excited for the next chapter. Max has so much depth here, I love it.
Asthetic 2008-05-27 ch 7,	abuseI love how you captured Max throwing pillows as Jude was throwing strawberries in the movie. It dictates how upset Max was at himself, which is always good. Plus Prudence and Sadie seemed very in character too. =3
Bookish0278 2008-05-27 ch 7,	abuseVery Good! lucy was less of a **,and there was that very good mention of how max changed after the war! I liked it a lot, and you seem, to be getting better, not that your were bad, but progression is good, right? Thank you for mentioning me, by the way, it is nice of you. Update soon! I do care how many times people view this, story, its a milestone!
Asthetic 2008-05-27 ch 6,	abuseI like this story. I like this story a lot.
Bookish0278 2008-05-22 ch 6,	abusehe sounds so cute! Joh, and max is always cute. I liked how it was set in present,and after all that antcipation, they finally met! well done! Bookish0278 update soon!

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