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| bk-1205 2008-08-13 ch 6,  | abuseIt's been two months. Where's the next update? LOL. Please hurry with the next chapter. I love these characters and can't wait to read more. |
| Foxfire832001 2008-06-12 ch 6, | abuseI really like the direction that this story has been going so far. I also like the fact that Will LaMantange Jr. showed up when he did, for JJ's sake. As for Spencer, I would also like to know how the hell our favorite boy-geniuse fell into his present comatose state anyway! Please Update this Story As Soon As Possible!! |
| numb3rslover 2008-06-11 ch 6, | abusehurry...plz...can u give us longer chapters plz |
| Ang 2008-06-10 ch 5, anon. | abuseLets see you posted this on the 8th. We had a fellowship after church. |
| Pedroia the Destroya 2008-06-10 ch 6, | abuseWhere's the OMG She didn't! moment? Good chapter.. |
| Sue1313 2008-06-08 ch 6, | abuseSomebody should be at the hospital sitting with Reid. They are just acting like he is not in a coma and may die. I am not at all sure this is the right girl for him. |
| Irinaj 2008-06-08 ch 5, | abusehey Cait! just read your last three chapter! and I have to say: I love this story so much! I really like Lynn, and her family! well I hope Reid we'll be fine! can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! |
| Sue1313 2008-06-08 ch 5, | abuseI can't believe so many of her family have come when they are not even married. I am not to sure this is the right girl for Reid. What do we really know about her? I can't wait to read he next chapter. Please bring Reid out of his coma. |
| Angel of the Night Watchers 2008-06-07 ch 4, | abuseThis was a great story. I loved this chapter. I think you should definitely bring the siblings into the story. :) |
| Dropkick95 2008-06-05 ch 4, | abuseGreat job. :) UPDATE As soon as you can. |
| Sue1313 2008-06-05 ch 4, | abuseWOW! You got a bunch in this chapter. Thanks for giving us some background on Lynn. It was so sweet what Garcia said about her loving Reid and him loving her. He is fighting for his life. I can't wait for more. It would be good to see her siblings and see how they react and if Reid knows them very well or if at all. I am so glad the team is there. Good story! |
| cmwinner 2008-06-04 ch 3, anon. | abuseYou updated it just for me, how sweet! :) Good job, I like! I want more about the interaction of the team meeting Lynn! |
| Angel of the Night Watchers 2008-06-04 ch 3, | abuseI think this is very good! I completely understand not knowing where the story is going. Sometimes you start a story thinking it'll go one direction and it takes you another. It's perfectly alright. |
| Mistress Bumblebee 2008-06-04 ch 3, | abuseawesome story, hope reid'll get better. |
| Dropkick95 2008-06-04 ch 3, | abuseUPDATE PLEASE! |