*sniff* You made me cry
I've never shown that kind of emotion for a story before on Fanfiction.
You're just THAT good. But the story was too sad for me.

Oh my gosh this story made me cry... It was so well written.

I felt like Iris really was a real person because of this. I got lost in the story, and I felt like i was part of that world.

Please write more of these type of stories!

beautifully written... It really makes you feel for all of the characters, and it lets you understand them and how hard life was for them.

This actually fits the PW plot line really well.

What I really liked about it was that it was so complex, just like real life. Great read. Awesome job.

You beautifully handled an incredibly taboo topic, and produced a mature and moving peace of fiction.

Touche!

I loved this story! Phoenix Wright is lacking in yuri and twincest~ lol. The ending made me really sad but I'm angst ** so it's all good. lol. XP Anyways, excellent story!

Again, I hate homosexuals morally (not personally), but that really was incredible.

Wow! This is amazing!! The diary sounds exactly like it was written by Iris - not sure why Edgeworth turned up for the funeral though! :)

This story supports certain assumptions that I have about Dahlia.

The first is that Dahlia tended to have a low opinion of men hence why she so willingly cut a swath of destruction through the lives of several males such as Terry Fawles, Phoenix, etc.

The second is that Dahlia seems to seek to hurt or even kill someone if they've (in her mind) betrayed her or seek to destroy her. While this isn't an excuse for her actions, it shows that Dahlia doesn't go around killing people just for the hell of it.

It makes me happy to see that Dahlia actually did care about Iris even during the "I'm a succubus" phase of her life and that they always sought to protect each other.

It made what happened to their relationship all the sadder.

This story of course makes me hate their parents for putting them through hell and eventually cause their demise. Their parents should be the ones rotting in prison on death row for their actions.

As for Valerie, until now, I had actually felt bad for her being murdered but after reading how in this story, how she mistreated Dahlia and Iris along with acting greedy and selfish, I don't feel so bad for her.

On a more funny note, I can easily imagine a young Dahlia getting back at people who picked on Iris by slipping laxatives or something equally shocking but harmless in their food and/or drinks. heh heh...

In any case, at least Dahlia and Iris are reunited in heaven or as sparrows...

Great job on the story! To be honest, I was little iffy on whether or not I wanted to read this. Dahlia/Iris just sounded plain weird XD I like the great insight we get into Iris and Dahlia outside the cases. Using a diary, although normally a bit cliche, worked very well. I feel so sorry for Iris, still loving Dahlia after all that and deciding to go with her.

The only problem with the story are the few occasions where you end up hitting enter in the middle of a sentence XD Other than that, wonderful job!