Mmmm.

I loved the start of this story. Some great writing and Jessica's uber snobbyness is realy well done (Nice to see someone from the SGC who isn't part of the 'Team America' brigade).

However, you kind of lost me whith the 'supernatural' stuff. I afraid it's one plot twist too far. Multi-crossovers rarely work (I can only think of one good one) and I'm afraid the same is true with this one.

If you had stuck with being a 'SGC-team-on-Galactica-and-gets-cuaght' piece this would have been one of best BSG/SG crossover out there, but as it is ...

Oh well, sorry I'm being very positive. Don't take it personnaly, you realy are a good writer.

Get rid of all of the vampires.

Good update. Though there was noting really going on in this chapter. Please update soon!

Trife

good update. It looks like things are about to get interesting on the BSG. Please update soon!

Trife

I'll probably reread this story after the dark shadows movie comes out.

Jessica is making too many stupid mistakes.

Yay your back. Sorry about the cat.

This is quite interesting. Update soon. Good luck on your novels.

vampires! wtf?

oh well. up to chapter 7 this was a really good read.

peace.

how do they know about the cylons?

what the fuck is with this chapter?

its like you threw in characters for no reason. absolutely no reason.

i know they are important personalities in their respected shows, but to deviate from the galactica, the Daedalus's investigation, to something else... why would they have some one with a "crippling" issue be head of a team? with the clues you put in this good so far till this chapter, i'm thinking werewolf. which is retarded. i would understand emotional issues. maybe deformities. bah. i really like this. i am going to continue reading, hoping for the best.

Just some generally positive feedback to encourage you to keep going, I like crossovers in general, and this one specifically. Good work, please continue.

Both interesting and slightly creepy!

The thought occurs, not that you're really writing with a military emphasis, that if this is indeed Weir from canon, then she's on an Asuran Aurora class. That's more powerful than anything the colonials or cylons can imagine. Not to mention, Weir and the others are replicators. By canon there are only about 20 of them too.

Still, very interesting!

Hm.

Asurans then? Thrace and the Cylons better watch out. If that's an Aurora they've got as in canon, then if they try anything they'll get a volley full of drones.

Should be interesting, keep it up!

“Why not?” She gave the President an odd smile. “He’s right about there only being one god.”

sounds like a christian fanatic...lost me here