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| Yvy 2008-05-10 ch 4,  | abuseI love it when the old crew gets together again. |
| ilexx 2008-05-10 ch 4, | abuseExcellent chapter, with many great ideas that weave together into a very gripping picture. Really, really well done. |
| Xeromem 2008-05-09 ch 4, | abuseNow that the gangs all here things are bound to get exciting. |
| Faded Feathers 2008-05-08 ch 3, | abusePredujuce! Can AI's never have a life! |
| Yvy 2008-05-05 ch 3, | abuseUhoh, the plot thickens. |
| ilexx 2008-05-02 ch 3, | abuseVery good chapter - and very appropriately named, too... Great description of their lives together. And although both Rommie and Dylan are so very different from the way they were portrayed in the show (which makes sense, considering the time that passed), it's nice to have a glimpse or two of their more familiar sides occasionally: So Dylan has to give up his men's room... Ever the self-sacrificing hero, hm? |
| Xeromem 2008-05-02 ch 3, | abuseI love the way you're portraying Rommie and Dylan. They are still very much in character while you've added enhancements which makes them seem even more real. |
| questmistress 2008-05-02 ch 3, | abuseExcellent story so far. Well worth the wait. |
| Xeromem 2008-05-02 ch 2, | abuseThis a great start to a great story. All those little details really bring the characters to life. |
| Yvy 2008-05-02 ch 2, | abuse"if he could simply lock her in a closet until she reached her majority." That line made me chuckle, this is good stuff. |
| ilexx 2008-05-01 ch 2, | abuseIt's nice to see Rommie handling a situation even as unusual with her usual effeciency. (And Dylan's gone very fast into 'father'-mode.) |
| ilexx 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseGood start. The letters introducing the setting are a neat idea, very well executed. |