I remember seeing this story a while ago and having an interest in it, but I was too busy to read it. I found the beginning to be remarkabley well made. It reminded me of a crazy book on assassinations and twists. I look forward to reading the rest of this.

Please don't kill this story! I swear I will die if you do!

you freaking stop this story, and i will come after you with throwing knives and a machete. so continue or else. Im serious...

wow this story is awesome i see ur a christian n u like gakuen alice story too

I would say to put it all in normal POV. That would be more helpful to the story. It may not tell all that is being thought but it does show whats happening entirely.
-A.P.

Yay! You updated! I'm so happy! Quittinng never really solves anything. Plz keep updating!

I loved your story! :) Every part of it was dramatic but I totally adored it! Please update soon!

Take care & God bless..

i liek the story soo much! plz update as soon as you can

You really switched Blossom and Bubbles personalities in this story. It's kinda weird to see Blossom so nervous and clumsy and happy-go-lucky, etc. If you had kept that though I think this would've made an awesome BoomerxBubbles story.

Blossom is way OOC. She's acting like Bubbles.

Squee! ><

That was so cute! =0

Aw

And Boomer...

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CUTE! ><

...Umm the first chapter was actually kind of like mine for Meant to Kill Made To Love. And I know you got the idea off my story and I'm flattered and all..nice story..a bit choppy and stuff and off with the POV's but I think being in Bricks POV would be best..thats only my opinion though. I'm thinking about how I would write my assasin story with Brick as the killer instead of Blossom. But anyways have fun...

cool i luv it

good work keep riting and i no its gona get better ;)
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YAY CUTE LOVINESS!
PLZ UPDATE I LOVE THIS STORY!!