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| lepidopteran 2008-07-08 ch 15,  | abuseanother great chapter! i like your character Harry, i dont know why, there's just something about him. lol. nice work, keep it up! |
| spinkle22 2008-07-07 ch 14, anon. | abuseWow, really good review! I'm too lazy to log in... but you know how it is! I like the way this one is a bit faster than the others, if you know what I mean. More goes on in it, it covers a larger amount of time. So far, a great story - keep it up! Spinky :D |
| lepidopteran 2008-07-06 ch 14, | abuseLoved it! As usual, the Amber/Hex antics were very entertaining! Was very sad to see the team break down like that :( But I'm glad Paulo's alright! Very well written, can't wait for more! Lepi xo. |
| ChristinaAngel 2008-06-27 ch 13, | abuseGood advance on the story, I like how Paulo finds out about what was actually happening (sort of) and how he referred to Hex and Amber as an old married couple and how he pegged Alex's personality. Thanks for updating! |
| lepidopteran 2008-06-26 ch 13, | abuseGreat chapter! Really liked Paulo's thoughts about the rest of the team - especially about Alex! Very amusing. Update soon! Lepi xo |
| lepidopteran 2008-06-21 ch 12, | abusethat was sad :( poor keisha. im loving all the suspense and action mixed with all the necessary emotional stuff. awesome work. |
| be-nice-to-nerds 2008-06-20 ch 12, | abuseThis is really good. Poor Keshia! On a lighter note, I really like the Hex/Amber interaction in here ( We really need to find names easier to type for 'ships- Hamber?) My favourite part was probably: '**,' Hex gasped. 'We have to get out.' We started sprinting again and I answered, 'No duh. Unless you want to get blown to smithereens.' He shot me a disbelieving look. 'We're running for our lives and you still have time to be a smart **.' Keep up the good work! |
| spinkle22 2008-06-20 ch 12, | abuseIt's amazing how you can be writing two completely different fics at the same time! They're both really good! Spinky :D |
| ChristinaAngel 2008-06-20 ch 12, | abusePoor Keisha! I hope whoever killed her will pay for it. But I'm glad that Amber and Hex are together but I hpope the others are okay. good chapter. |
| ChristinaAngel 2008-06-19 ch 11, | abuseLol Amber and Li's reaction. Panic settling in, what is with the alarm? How did their cover get blown? I liked the cute little bit of AmberHex in there and I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| spinkle22 2008-06-18 ch 11, anon. | abuseWoah, they're shooting people! Scary... can't wait for an update! Spinky :D |
| ChristinaAngel 2008-06-17 ch 10, | abuseI'm loving it at the moment with the horrid guards and the punishment for escapees (disgusting but interesting). I loved how worried Hex was over Amber and I'm very interested in the purpose behind the training thing. |
| spinkle22 2008-06-12 ch 10, | abuseWow, intruiging! Can't wait for more. Spinky :D |
| lepidopteran 2008-06-11 ch 10, | abusebom bom BOM!! ooh things are getting serious. loving it! |
| lepidopteran 2008-06-09 ch 9, | abuselol. paulo didnt do it coz he was sleeping!! *hmm.. that sure doesnt sound like paulo :P* another great chapter! keep it up. |