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| canny carbon copy 2007-11-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhile I'm a rabid lover of Gibson's style, credibility, cleverness, etc., and feel that anyone and everyone should aspire to be like him when they grow up. (Provided they have a MDI lust and a beautiful arc of understanding in regards to macroeconomics.)It would do Gibson as well as yourself justice if you'd write a little more outside of directly lifted sentences. The work you actually put in the story was pretty good. Sentences describing Turner shouldn't be Chinese Room in origin. |
| FireHand 2003-08-05 ch 1, | abuseOnce again, great story. Which reminds me, I really should re-read the Gibson books... |
| Wheeli 2002-02-19 ch 1, | abuseNicely done! |