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Reviews For: The Bus Meets The Hotel

canny carbon copy
2007-11-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseWhile I'm a rabid lover of Gibson's style, credibility, cleverness, etc., and feel that anyone and everyone should aspire to be like him when they grow up. (Provided they have a MDI lust and a beautiful arc of understanding in regards to macroeconomics.)It would do Gibson as well as yourself justice if you'd write a little more outside of directly lifted sentences. The work you actually put in the story was pretty good. Sentences describing Turner shouldn't be Chinese Room in origin.
FireHand
2003-08-05
ch 1,
abuseOnce again, great story. Which reminds me, I really should re-read the Gibson books...
Wheeli
2002-02-19
ch 1,
abuseNicely done!
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