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| MusicalSoul 2008-07-22 ch 12, | abuseYou had me gasping by the end of the chapter! But, I kinda did know that Maiid would do that; she's strong willed and responsible and that's probably what she'd do, and I was right. Keep up the awesome work! : ) |
| MusicalSoul 2008-07-22 ch 11, | abuseThis chapter was really awesome! I loved the scene between Maiid and Malik, and the way they talked about the past events. Keep up the good work! : ) |
| shuffle-panda 2008-07-15 ch 12, | abuseOMG! well this is gunna cause both Maiid and Altaïr a lot of trouble. I wonder how this will turn out. Yay! DRAMA!! Can't wait for the next update ^^ |
| Mandalore18 2008-07-11 ch 12, | abuseI think that would really hurt and Altair will be really mad now and something bad will happend good job. |
| Mandalore18 2008-07-11 ch 11, | abuseSorry if this review s late but i did't have internet for a week but now i'm back and reviewing agine I like the chapter building other chacter relations is good now i'm going to read chapter 12. |
| Nun-woman 2008-07-11 ch 12, | abuseWARNING, RANDOM REVIEW, LE'HORRIBLE SPELLING, AND VERY VERY OFF TOPIC! You have been warned.. _ And once again, you'll get the best, and possible LONGEST review EVER by NW! (Off topic, Nikolas is 26 years old, and he might not accompany us on our week of chillin', he looks like he's our age.. xD) Anyway, another great chapter. Thank god I'm getting a computer that can run AC so I can play!! Then my reviews actually would be worth something. But, you know I try my hardest to be a good girl ;) Another OT, since you're not on MSN, teme! Pontus and Sebastian will live at my house... From Saturday till THURSDAY! OH GOD THE HORROR! So there's a chance my computer will get stolen, and I won't be able to talk to you since our FRIGGIN TELEPHONES ARE DEAD! If teh internets is active the phones DIE and vice versa... You can contact me on my cell though... ANYWAYS NO MORE OFF TOPIC HERE! Great chapter, write more or our week is going to be worse than you can possible think... ;) I have an idea though... After the FINAL chapter... Would you let me write an, oh so serious, alternative ending and put it up in YOUR story? I'll write and send after the grand finale. Many hugs and kisses! Safety and Peace upon you, Sister. (L) /Nunniethewoman xD |
| shuffle-panda 2008-07-09 ch 11, | abuseYay! an update! *cheers* Well at least Malik and Maiid are getting along now. I wonder what the reason was behind Altair leaving so suddenly and for a long period of time, did he really just use Maiid? That would be so sad! I can't wait for the next update! :D |
| Nun-woman 2008-07-07 ch 11, | abuseI don't want to read slower, I want to read fast, fast as LIGHTNING! BOHYAH! You didn't put my beautiful ending in. You big meanie. Good chapter btw, little one ;) Me wuwz you wewy much, no come home! Me miss you big time! Safety and Peace upon you, Sister. /NW |
| shuffle-panda 2008-06-05 ch 10, | abuseI'm IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY! haha, your English isn't really bad, and it does improve every chapter. Great Work and I hope you update soon! Haha, I added this story to my favorites and put it on alert :) |
| MusicalSoul 2008-06-02 ch 10, | abuseI love this story! You've done a great job, and I don't think your English is bad at all! Can't wait to see what happens to Maiid and Altair...especially with that 'quick judging' nature of hers. Keep up the good work! |
| Mandalore18 2008-05-31 ch 10, | abuseGood Job as usual sorry I can't think of anything right now I was just on a long trip. So Happy Writing |
| Gaignun Girl 2008-05-31 ch 10, | abuseCha! Nice Chapter! Gosh! Can't wait for the next chappie! XP lol. Aww...I'm glad you didn't think of me like that. XP Its my pleasure, I will keep reviewing until this fic ends or so. lol. XP Keep up the great work! =] :] XD Gaignun Girl |
| Nun-woman 2008-05-31 ch 10, | abuseI HATE YOU! I HATE TIMESKIPPING! Damn, I'm confused again. I can't put my finger on who's who und so weiter. CONFUSING. I didn't like this chapter. BOO TOO YOOU! Gör om gör rätt. Do it again, do it right. xD But seriously. It's confusing. Or maybe I didn't read that closely. ARGH. Explain yourself. I still like the story though. /NUNNIE! |
| Gaignun Girl 2008-05-26 ch 9, | abuselol. Thanks. No rape. XP Hah! Good chappie though. XD Haha...I'm making a fool out of myself arent I? XP XD Gaignun Girl |
| Nun-woman 2008-05-25 ch 9, | abuseNun-woman - Yeah, armless dude. Do the "Who am I" - dance, please. ;D ... PAY ME, and I dance. xD Okay, Alty killed her, then not. Then Alty iz cipple. Why iz Alty cripple... He just miss a finger... Yes, back to the review nunnie. Great Chapter, I found it interesting. I have to stop reviewing so damn early.. it's not even 7am yet. My MIND HAS NOT AWAKEN YET. // Nunnie |