wonderful

Love your writing

I found myself laughing or grinning idiotically quite a bit during this wonderful fic. It was a perfectly constructed inner monologue of a class A commitment-phobic. Awesome job.

I love how you wrote this. I've been on Sara's end of things and you just captured it completely. :)

Almost 30 minutes of pure pleasure, and then curiosity, and then anger, and then pain, and then surprise, and then... come on, this was the most real and amazingly beautiful story I've ever read.

It doesn't cause you to sigh at the end and say "yeah, so romantic... Yet, it's not the same out there and I have to come back to real life." No! This is so... sincerous that gives us hope enough to keep trying or best to make things work out, even when the wind seems to change direction.

You inspire me for life, Summer.

Truth to be told, I do admire and appreciate you deeply.
I'm already eager read your next story (though I consider this one your opus magnum yet).

Hope to 'hear' (read) from you soon.
My best wishes.
XXO

This is definitely one of your best!! Thanks so much!

I loved this story. Great Job!!

Hallo, a wonderful sad and still hopeful story. It makes me feel Gsr all the way. thank you !
kerstin

Wonderful story! I've really been struggling with some of the 7th season scenes that suggested that their emotional communication was pretty much nonexistent throughout their intimate relationship, and you really made it all very plausible here! You portray a very in-character Grissom. I'd like to see you do another one-shot in this same vein, maybe set around Ending Happy/Leaping Lizards?

This is really good! A nice portrait of what's bothering Gil Grissom, and his blunt way of dealing with what he's afraid of. I really enjoyed it, thank you.

Very well written! Fantastic character portrayals!

"He was suffocating during his own personal monsoon season.
Wait. That didn't make sense.
You'd be more likely to suffocate during a dry spell and …
Okay. He'd go back to drowning during the monsoon."

Very good. Perfect example of Grissom's overthinking.

Wonderful. You have a gift. Keep writing.

great and too short. loved every minute of it,

Great story :D

I liked that very much. You wrote his realization really well. I'll never think of "Free Willy" in the same way though! LOL

Beth