Update please i love this story (just added to favorites!)

this is awesome, and the play form is so cool! please update!

I like it. Very good shooting scene. It sounds weird, but they're my favorites to write. Watch spelling-it's not a big deal, but it's important.

Really good. Unusual way to write, but i like it.


just one thing that bothered me. The place they live is Playa Linda..not summerland. =)

Yeah, you updated it! No, I don't think it's harder to read. First I needed to get used to this, but now it's just.. Normal to read. Noo! Cameron can't die! Please, don't let him die! Oh and did Joey die? Please update as soon as you can :)

Woah...

noo! you have to update right now! no, lol. I saw your story, but I just never started to read and now I finally did! Please update as soon as you can I want to now what's going to happen.
And did I mention that your story is great? I never expected something like this to happen. Wow. Update ASAP! :D
And btw, after this 'season finale' or episode is there going to be more?
xx

Love it! OMG please update soon! I can't wait to find out! NO I HATE CLIFFHANGERS!

Krissy

Hm, sounds like there's a lot going on! You're starting to get me hooked. Update soon! Also, I believe the designer guy is named Colby. And I have no idea what happened to him.

Love it! Uh oh it sounds like we have some trouble coming! Please update soon!

Krissy

I really like the idea of the story. Uh oh, why did Bradin really come back? Is he going to like OD on those pills? Oh and Mona died in a car accident and Amber is still friends with Nikki she just wasn't shown in the last couple episodes of the show because she was away visting someone.

Please update soon!

Krissy

PS: the all caps is kind of hard to read though

Hey, this is an interesting premise here. One thing I might change is the writing from all caps to lowercase, because it seems a bit much. Writing it as a script is unique, because you can see the character's actions. And as for what happened to Mona, I believe she died in a car accident. I'm not sure about Amber. I'm kind of like you because I haven't seen many of the episodes. I'll be looking for your next chapter! Keep writing:)