This was a very good portrayel of a person trying to deal with the shock and grief of a loved one dying. I enjoyed reading it.

Cloud & Sephiroth have already suffered so much... But killing off one of them is too barbaric... I just hope Sephiroth will be rescued soon in "Bend and Break". T.T I'm too emotional...

Ooh wow, very intense. I like the idea of Cloud just kinda freaking the heck out. Poor guy. And poor Zack, too! *hugs them* ;_;

Aw, poor Cloud! This was so intense and heartbreaking!

All those memories flashing through Cloud's mind must be just overwhelming. And those last lines ended the fic perfectly, but, gosh, they were so sad!

Mm, can't say for sure, but to me, it sounds like from T&D when something happens to Seph and Cloud's not sure why he cares o-o

The last line choked me up -- I was in tears. The emotions conveyed are . . . intense.

Thank you.

"Something clear splashed onto the asphalt. It was not raining."

...That was beautiful. Nice job.

Aww, poor Cloud... it's very poignant that he finally gets on good terms with Sephiroth, only to have this happen...
Oh, and poor Zack! I can only imagine what he must be feeling!
Another moving story!