brilliant on how u show the character true self.
The deadly sin part wuz amazing that it kinda seem how i new someone like that but fics like this kind is worth reading than any other but hope for a update.

This story has one of the best portrayal of Soifon ever. Her characterization was spot on. I have been searching high and low for a fic like yours and I'm so glad I found it. It's really interesting to see how all her emotions drove her to insanity(but it was also partially Aizen's manipulation) and yet at the same time completely plausible. All the other characters and their motives fit the bill too. I'm literally amazed by your story telling.

I've also noticed that you haven't updated in a while, and I'm guessing that means something bad, but it's okay for me to hope and pray right? So, I absolutely love this fic and well, I pray for an update.

An interesting look at a very twisted Soi Fong's mindset (you make her feelings seem disturbingly understandable, well done *grins*). I'm literally on the edge of my seat with anticipation.

Looking forward to the next chapter, hope you update again soon.

Brilliantly done. I especially like the way you fitted the 7 sins to her, and then added the Obsession as her 'special' sin. I think you write about Yoruichi and Soifon in an amazing way, and you really bring them to life.

Looking forward to the next chapter! And don't worry, short chapters are fine :)

Um... don't know if you know who I am or not, but you recently added one of my stories to your alert list... and your pen name intrigued me, for some rather obscure reason. And so I clicked it, and it lead me to your profile. I was surprised at first, there aren't many writers like you left here. And then I saw this... I'm an avid YoruSoi fan, if it isn't apparent already.

I read the first half in earnest, but ended up skimming the rest -- not because it wasn't interesting, rather, on the contrary, but because I'm really supposed to be doing homework at the moment. ><

All that said (I hope I didn't bore you), your writing is exceptional. In more ways than I can list...

And having read your profile, I also really enjoy reading about psychogical feelings and emotions, because it gives the story so much more depth when it is character centric -- beacuse without them, even the best plot would fail.

Anyways, all I wanted to say was, this story is definitely stalk-worthy. And you... too.

I mean that in the most innocent way, of course.

... Oh and the ending... priceless. =]

Excellent, I really like your portrayal of Soifon.
I really like how this fic is going and go YoruSoi!

Great chapter! I liked the description of the sins in accordance to Soi, they really do fit well with her character. Keep up the good work can't wait for the next chapter!

nice chapter, update soon please.

This is how Soi should be portrayed..
Bitter, angry, obsessed and kicks a lot of ass~!
Haha, love your fic.. One of the best present here..

Good job. I like how you illustrated the sins with Soifon's actions. The little tidbit about Urahara's Bankai and Soifon's own was interesting. Calling them sadistic and bloodthirsty while not exactly showing us what they are, brilliant illustration there. I can't wait to see what happens next as the story moves into Hueco Mundo and towards the inevitable.

Tyrchon

This truly is an incredible fic. IT really reflects who I think Soifon is. The canon version of her is too soft. XD

what intensity!

very descriptive, update soon!
^^

whoa. nice chapter. loved how Yoruichi just appeared in the bath.

great chp but are you going to up date sounding in the dark just write it somewhere plese

Dreamer is a whorez.

Jon