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| greeneyedwolfiewithhandcanc... 2008-09-07 ch 15, | abuselove the story! please updated soon! |
| Bookish0278 2008-09-06 ch 15, | abuseI HATE CLIFFIES!v PLEASE PLEASE (Mr. Postman) bring me no more blues, just update really soon, hey I rhymed! OMG I'm John Lennon reincarnated! Wouldn't that be interesting? No, sadly he is gone. :( Rambling over. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
| Juno227 2008-08-08 ch 15, | abuseWOAH. I never liked Eric! |
| spectacularspectacular 2008-07-30 ch 14, | abuseaw! that was sweet :) |
| Juno227 2008-07-30 ch 14, | abuseVery good! |
| mypersonalsun 2008-07-28 ch 13, | abuseWow, I can't believe Max has managed to wait this long! That being said, Teddy! I was waiting for him to reappear :D And marriage and Max? Those two things definitely do not belong in the same sentence...but I don't know...family-man Max seems to be changing bit by bit. Perhaps one day he will be ready. Much love, Ellie. |
| mypersonalsun 2008-07-28 ch 10, | abuse0_0 uh-oh *dies* This is very not good. I know these reviews are short but I'm REALLY trying to get caught up to the end with this. |
| mypersonalsun 2008-07-28 ch 9, | abuseOkay, one word, and technically I don't even think it's a word: AH! |
| mypersonalsun 2008-07-28 ch 5, | abuseTHERE'S ROSE! Ha! I was waiting around for her. She's right, Max can indeed be hot :) Teddy? Interesting...let's see where that goes... |
| mypersonalsun 2008-07-28 ch 2, | abuseToo cute! Max is sort of being an **, but what else would you expect from him? But she's DEFINITELY a little spitfire. This should be GOOD. |
| mypersonalsun 2008-07-28 ch 1, | abusew00t! I'm here to read and review as suggesting by you at my story, Struck By the Silver Hammer. First of all, she's named Valerie! Amazing job on name choice :) That and Rose are both perfectly appropriate. :S Martha...I like it, but I wouldn't have expected it. ANYWAY, a child of Max? That could be dangerous...get too many Carrigans in the world and it will go to pieces. |
| Juno227 2008-07-27 ch 13, | abuseVERY good! |
| Alice Carrigan 2008-07-26 ch 12, | abusei insanely love this story but in this chapter everyone was totally out of character..especially jojo and max... sorry |
| Alice Carrigan 2008-07-15 ch 11, | abuseaw...lmao... im really happy now... |
| Alice Carrigan 2008-07-15 ch 10, | abuseim a little confused... whoes rose again? but im glad they're gonna go bakc together..max is soo cute!! |