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greeneyedwolfiewithhandcanc...
2008-09-07
ch 15,
abuselove the story! please updated soon!
Bookish0278
2008-09-06
ch 15,
abuseI HATE CLIFFIES!v PLEASE PLEASE (Mr. Postman) bring me no more blues, just update really soon, hey I rhymed! OMG I'm John Lennon reincarnated! Wouldn't that be interesting? No, sadly he is gone. :( Rambling over.


PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Juno227
2008-08-08
ch 15,
abuseWOAH. I never liked Eric!
spectacularspectacular
2008-07-30
ch 14,
abuseaw!
that was sweet :)
Juno227
2008-07-30
ch 14,
abuseVery good!
mypersonalsun
2008-07-28
ch 13,
abuseWow, I can't believe Max has managed to wait this long! That being said, Teddy! I was waiting for him to reappear :D
And marriage and Max? Those two things definitely do not belong in the same sentence...but I don't know...family-man Max seems to be changing bit by bit. Perhaps one day he will be ready.
Much love, Ellie.
mypersonalsun
2008-07-28
ch 10,
abuse0_0 uh-oh *dies*
This is very not good. I know these reviews are short but I'm REALLY trying to get caught up to the end with this.
mypersonalsun
2008-07-28
ch 9,
abuseOkay, one word, and technically I don't even think it's a word:
AH!
mypersonalsun
2008-07-28
ch 5,
abuseTHERE'S ROSE! Ha! I was waiting around for her. She's right, Max can indeed be hot :)
Teddy? Interesting...let's see where that goes...
mypersonalsun
2008-07-28
ch 2,
abuseToo cute! Max is sort of being an **, but what else would you expect from him? But she's DEFINITELY a little spitfire. This should be GOOD.
mypersonalsun
2008-07-28
ch 1,
abusew00t! I'm here to read and review as suggesting by you at my story, Struck By the Silver Hammer.
First of all, she's named Valerie! Amazing job on name choice :) That and Rose are both perfectly appropriate. :S Martha...I like it, but I wouldn't have expected it.
ANYWAY, a child of Max? That could be dangerous...get too many Carrigans in the world and it will go to pieces.
Juno227
2008-07-27
ch 13,
abuseVERY good!
Alice Carrigan
2008-07-26
ch 12,
abusei insanely love this story but in this chapter everyone was totally out of character..especially jojo and max...
sorry
Alice Carrigan
2008-07-15
ch 11,
abuseaw...lmao...
im really happy now...
Alice Carrigan
2008-07-15
ch 10,
abuseim a little confused... whoes rose again?
but im glad they're gonna go bakc together..max is soo cute!!
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