Wow, such a well rounded, detailed story! Loved the rain imagery!

Nice fic. I enjoyed the interaction between Stella and Adam. How nervous Adam was at the prospect of having to step up and take charge when he was really unsure of what to do. The fact that Stella was unable to take charge and the effect that had on him. And of course the Stella/Mac moments.
I enjoyed.

Wow. Amazing story! I sat down and had to read the whole thing in one go; I couldn't stop. Brilliantly written, well done!

Wow, I just spent the last hour reading this. I love it! I'm glad I got to read it all at once though; I don't think I would have been able to stand waiting for new chapters.
All your details seemed very accurate in my mind. Then again, I'm not so great in science and math, so seeing it in a fic interests me.
I can see why you and Lily are writing together. You're both amazing writers.

Lim x

This is, I think, the BEST CSI:NY story I have EVER read. Keep writing :)

I know this was written a while ago, but it is phenomenal.

I absolutely love it. Great job.

Absolutely amazing how you used the noises and the weather. Well done! Nothing even remotely unrealistic about this story and that's what makes it so great.

Amazing story! Absolutely amazing! I really enjoyed it! I'm glad that they all made it through alive!

Amazing chapter! I really enjoyed it! Very emotional! I hope Adam and Stella will be okay and that everyone will stop blaming themselves!

Oh wow! What a terrible choice to have to make! I hope theat they'll ll be okay! Great chapter!

Great chapter! I really enjoyed it! I'm glad that Hawkes is safe now! I hope that they get to Stella and Adam soon!

Wow! Very intense chapter! I hope that Mac finds them before it's too late!

That's got to be so scary! I hope that someone is able to find them and free them! Great chapter!

Amazing chapter! I really enjoyed it! Great ending! Very intense! Way to go Adam!

Great chapter! I'm glad that Hawkes is in charge now! I love what he said about Stella! Perfect! I really hope she's okay!