|Reviews for My New Life|
| Song Of The Sparrow 5/2/08 . chapter 1
Awesome beginning, a few spelling mistakes, but a good beginning. You have 2 capitalize the first letter of each word in a title (E.g. My New Life).
Update quickly please.
| theatergirl 5/2/08 . chapter 1
Good so far! Just a few mistakes with commas, and I think you ment their, when you said there. :]