The italics at the end are brilliant and soo thoughtful. In essence, I loved this!

OMG This is amazing, I'm surprised you dont have more reviews. Amazing Joob! Murtagh is the best

Wow, that was really good, great plot and evrythin XD, loved it :)

E, I loved it! Poor Murtagh, his life sucks...*please excuse the understatement*

But the story was great! 10\100! n.n

ok, ok, I know I already reviewed this chappie b4 you deleted it, but I loved it so much I'm rereading it. I've been thinking aboutit because you've burned in my memory, "Tomorrow's my ninteenth birthday." I seriously almost sobbed!

uh... eragon is half or more elf he can't eat meat

wait a minute...wtf?

why r there of these?

I-It's over? WHY?(Sulks)

Spottedstar, leader of WindClan

holy hell this is good update

This is really good! I'm going to read the rest of the chapters... later... but, I will read them! So, great chapter. Cyas!

I too thought that story was already posted. I thought that there were already about 15 chapters of the story... Is this one going to be different than the last?

didn't you already post this?

i loved it the first though...