you like the word sugerdrop, don't you?It's an amazing story, but seriously, you used that word like, five times in it. plus the title. Besided that, though, kudos on the one-shot!

WHY, WHY, WHY is it OVER?
That was brilliant.. plz, another chapter!
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I loved it!! Will there be more?

That was really good! I really liked it! I also liked how Jake imprinted on someone that wasn't Leah. Seriously half the fanfictions I've read have him imprinting on Leah, which wouldn't happen. Would you mind if I put this fanfiction on my blog?


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that was really good!

please please please please please please write more!! I'm begging you!!

All i can say is W-O-W are you going to write even more? Because that would probably be the best!! OME!! I really hope that you write more even if it just says 1st chapter!

ah! you said the end but its a cliff hanger

please write more!PLZ! i love it and i would really like it if you would write more! i love the part where Jacob finally imprinted ...I felt really bad for him before but now he has his love and that is great...you should really write more!

Wow, that would be the perfect ending to it all. B E A Utiful! Alice was perfectly Alice, I don't see Rosalie being at their wedding, but oh well, and overall, nice! looking foward to the next one!

this was cute

I loved the story although you kind of used sugardrop a little to much.Just next time try to be subtle with relating the title to the story.All and all I enjoyed the read and wish there was another chapter to go with it!