This is a great story! Putting it on follow-and favorite.

I love this movie and I love well made OC's! And thus I love this fic, so could you please find it in your heart to update.

Please:)

Oh. Very interesting, why have you stopped? Continue! :D I like.

Oh my goodness! You should update this missy! :P

Ah, it's good! It's realistic. Average girl being to scared to accuse her brother. Middle-class white woman being to politically correct to tell Mort to leave them alone.

:)

It would happen. And excellent story.

Marlowe.

Please, please, please update soon! i want to read on!

I kind of like this story. It's WAY better than the other stories I've read where Shooter is an actual person, or like Sweeney Todd, or temporary... x.x

I do want to read more, even though you haven't updated this in a long time.

This sounds pretty good; I really can't wait until the next chapter, I hope you update soon.

Love it! Perfect pace (I disagree with one of the other reviewers), excellent writing, great job at keeping Mort in-character... and you're leaps ahead of many of the other stories on here that have the teenaged-girl/main female character go completely ga-ga for Mort within the first two chapters. -_-;; (Whether your story turns out to be a romance or not-I know you'll make it awesome either way. ) Update soon!

Really good first chapter. I love the

“Mad Man Mort? The murderer?”

It sounds like it should be an old folk song or somethin.

Hahaha I could definately imagine kids calling him "Mad Man Mort Rainey" after what he did. Very cool story :)

its moving very slow. I think you should expand Eden's charachter a little bit. but you have kept my interest

Well, I just see a problem here: Do you really think that a mother would allow her daughter to work for a presumed murderer? Everybody in town know or think that he killed his wife and his lover...

I really like this chapter and how Mort didnt care he was working her so hard. I cant wait to find out what happens next.

Update soon please!

This chapter seemed a bit filler-ish, but it was a nice first-day-at-Mort's kinda chapter.