Wow XD.
You made it very easy to understand even though I've never read WoT and I really like how your so descriptive with clothing and such. However there are times where my heads spinning from the long sentences, also I think it would be clearer if you used the characters names more often because I occasionally confused as to who is talking to who.
That said, it's hard to believe this is your first fic, it flows very well! I eagerly await chapter 29, please update soon!

Wow. Great story so far...although I'm so surprised that Surien dismissed Toshiro Hitsuguya so effortlessly. I would have thought that she would have had some outrage as to a child being put in such situations. *shrugs* Who knows, maybe I'll see that in a later chapter. :P

~IO

There is a song by Papa Roach called "between angels and insects". I get why you named the chapter and how it relates to what happens in it, I'm just curious to know if you've heard of the song.

You know, I really think Alindrah is my favorite character of your OCs and possibly the other bleach characters you've wrote for. I love that Spartan 'you can't knock me down' mentality she has. It's almost superhuman. Where most women, nay, most people would have just been broken at this point she still holds on to her strength and honor. That is just remarkable in a character.
I can't get over that.

I know this might sound bad, but part of me dislikes Suiren. Okay, please don't throw rocks, it's just how I've felt about what's happened with Alindrah. See if I was Alindrah's friend/sister I would have busted in there by now and done my best to save her even if it meant risking my life. Now I know that there isn't really much Suiren can do about it being bound and all, and she doesn't really know all that is happening to her friend. And I don't blame her for that. I just wish she could do more about it. (not that I don't like reading about her and Byakuya). I really would love to see Renji go up in there and kick some ass (preferably Gin's). All in all, you have done your part as a writer in getting me emotionally invested in a character. Alindrah is defiantly at the top of the list.

I hope to see more of your writing. I love reading about Suiren and Aizen's deceptive relationship, it gives me chills just thinking about it. Good job on another chapter. Hope those two top paragraphs didn't make me sound crazy.

By the way, I definately imagined Alindrah smiling while she said she was going to kill Gin.

I adore this crossover and your writing. So, needless to say how happy I am to see that you are updating again. Thanks. Ragnell

I was DEFIANTLY thinking Shakira during Suiren's dance before you even said it in the author's comments.

Defiantly a well written chapter as usual. I loved Sneaky-Kyoroku and Sneaky-Rangiku. Definatly my favorite characters in this chapter. I also liked how you expanded on Suiren's character by making her a little mischievous herself. And seductive. I always like seeing how versatile a character can be, and that they don't just fit a generic stereotype. I look forward to reading more.

I hope to see you more on DA.

Oh...MY lord. YOU UPDATED! O curse the high heavens that have my inbox is so full that it took me THIS friggin' long to get to reading this...AUGH!

Ok, Sake Sister - let's DO this.

I LOVED the opening. It's really great that you take a moment for Suiren to process, to get some explanation - and it's really a treat how nicely you tie these two worlds together. It's done intelligently, and with respect to both canons - KUDOS! And I heart Ukitake!! Ehem, ok...moving on...

"Burn my soul, he certainly tastes real enough!'" MUWAHAHAHAHAH!! INCREDIBLE line from such a southern belle, for SHAME! (And by 'for shame' I mean 'you GO girl'!!) XD

Ah, poor Renji. He's always good for a chuckle...and he's SO badass/hawt to boot! Love him.

You can always count on Matsumoto to save the day!! Hahah, nice to see her again...

Oh HOLY lord. The Sa'sara. Uhm...WOW. Ok, Matsumoto dancing the sa'sara should be ILLEGAL. And SUIREN, what is WRONG with you?? OMG. *imagines her dancing the sa'sara for Byakuya* Ok, yup - there it goes... *brain melts*

SHUNSUI! You dirty little PERV!! HAHAHAHA, I LOVED him peeping at the sa'sara lesson!! Woohoo!!

AND BYAKUYA! BAD BYA!! HAHAHAH - oh lordy, they're ALL boyish little pervs at heart, aren't they?? ROFL And Matsu KNEW they were there and didn't tell Suiren!>! HAHAHAHAH - Oh Rangi, I always find new reasons to LOVE ya. :P

...AUGH! YES! OMFG! How can you NOT call that smut!?!? Ok ok...it wasn't smut persay. It wasn't even a lemon, really...more like a lime. But I'll TAKE it!! :D *does a happy dance, not unlike the sa'sara* Girl, between THIS smex and the GinAlindrah scene, you can NOT claim modesty around my ANY more!! XD (I say this as a good thing)

Ok, I'm going to stop gushing, cuz otherwise I won't stop. I LOVED this chap, KEEP WRITING...and well, there's more to say, but I'll reply to email instead of putting it in a review where everyone can see it. LOVE YA, Sake Sister - say hi to SuperCopHubby for me!! XD

Great chapters.
However, there are some things I think that you need to resolve sooner rather than later.
- The warder bond question shouldn't be left hanging much longer.
- Moghedien has an appointment in Tanchico, so she is also starting to overstay her welcome.
- Alindrah needs to meet Shuhei, and not just that Shuhei needs to be brought into the story during daytime also.

Ah -sigh of relief- you update again, Yuya-sama~ I’m glad to have read these two chapters. In fact, had I not checked my favorite stories updates, I would not have read these intriguing chapters.

Just one thing. -assumes Grammar Nazi disposition- I had to notice that while you were describing . . . Moghedien’s thoughts, you had misspelled ’aside’ with ’Aisde’. -breaks disposition-

Just thought you’d appreciate someone who really reads your work to point these things out. -smiles- -looks over review- Um, does it seem that . . . I don’t seem to be a 16-year-old writing this?

(sigh) As always, I LOVE your Gin and Aizen!! Something about them make so giddy with evil intentions, it's not even funny! Poor Alindrah is going to be so pissed when she break free from the spell! Though I suspect Gin will be happy to have his favorite toy back, I agree -with Gin- it doesn't seem as much fun if she's so compliant!

Can't wait for 29! (bounces) More!~

I honestly thought Bya was going to kill Captain Perv!! (nodnod) But I suppose it's a good thing he didn't - I kinda like the old dirtball haha!~

Is it okay... that I'm wondering WHO has the bracelet end of her a'dam on while she's playing with Bya? hahaha!~ Sorry the perverted thought just hit me as I was reading the ending of the story again!

That's my important comment of the chapter hahah! & it's not that I 'put up with you' silly, I enjoy your company. And I surely don't mind the dozens of belly dancing videos you laid in my PMbox when you were researching them! XD~

ONWARD to the next chapter!!~

YAY! More chapters! Cant wait for more! :D

This is my guess. If the name is going to be Japanese then I would say either saburedoragon or sunadoragon for sand dragon, or arenodoragon for desert dragon, though I wouldn't be supprised if you us something from the old tounge.

I like the Suiren/Byakuya romance.

However the story have some problems: 1. Pacing, there's a illusion that time passes faster for Suiren than for Alindrah. It seemed to take forever for Alindrah to return to the dreamworld. 2. The darkfriend warder plot seems too forced. 3. It would have been better to make Suiren just a noble from a Saldean high-nobility family, instead of having her related to canon characters.

I haven't read a good Wheel of time fic in a long time. Thanks for writing such an interesting story!