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Reviews For: Vanities

Jamie 2008-06-18 ch 4, anon.	abusesweet... I have an idea for the next chapter, the focus point- Elphaba has come of age to go to college. Will the feelings developing between Galinda and her prevent her from going? Who knows? It's just a suggestion... please continue!!
ALICE IT'S RAINing 2008-06-06 ch 4,	abusecan't wait for the next chapter p.s. great story, very cute bye:)
Spontaneous Combusken 2008-06-04 ch 3,	abuseThis fic is so high in the list of cutest things I've ever read. The first couple of chapters were too cute for words; I adored little 5-year-old Galinda so much, and the interactions between her and little Elphie were wonderful. I also love the complications and changes between them as they're growing up and I'm really, really looking forward to reading more of this.
wicked92 2008-05-20 ch 4,	abuseWow, this is really good. PLEASE continue! Its very, very good!
wickedfanatic06 2008-05-20 ch 3,	abuseThis is a very good story. Very fluffy and makes me want to cuddle with someone. haha. Please continue soon.
ReallyUhSharp 2008-05-19 ch 4,	abuseAww! I absolutely love the bit you added. It's nice how Helina noticed the little spark betwen them but wasn't altogether sure what it was. Ok, -deep breath- I think I'm ready to see them grow up now!
ReallyUhSharp 2008-05-18 ch 3,	abuseThey... they grew up already? =O Hmph. I quite like them grown up and beginning to fall for each other if truth be told... But... I was enjoying all the fluff when they were young! And I think you could have added more in places, for example made a little more of the first day at school. But that's just my opinion. I still like it the way you've done it; but I preferred the way you put more description into each incident, the way you did with the first chapter. Oh well. Keep updating! :)
Crazy Homeschooler 2008-05-17 ch 3,	abuseI loved this chapter!! LOVED it! I got shivers, I'm hyperventalating, so you did good. :) Loved the cuteness in the begining! And I love how comfortable Elphaba and Glinda are together! Please update soon! Please! I simply can't wait to see what happens next!
ReallyUhSharp 2008-05-16 ch 2,	abuseI absolutely adore the update. "And we can cuddle when we get home if you get too upset or overwhelmed" on Galinda's part actually made me 'Aww!' out loud! I really like the way you put across Galinda's mother too; she isn't mentioned at all in either the book or musical so you did well to use your own ideas. It's interesting that you made her kind rather than stuck-up as I would have imagined, but on the whole it works really well! Keep updating! The young Elphie and Galinda fluff is a lovely break from all the serious or angsty storylines :D
DarkwolfKnight 2008-05-16 ch 2,	abusethat was a cute little chapter. I love your portyal of them when they were younger. They are so cute. I'm glad that Glinda's family is accepting of her, that is good. I can't wait to read it when they are older and finally figure things out.
Crazy Homeschooler 2008-05-15 ch 2,	abuseAw... my heart melted from the cuteness. Aw... Please please please please please PLEASE update soon! Loved the young Galinda and Elphaba, so adorible :) Can't wait till they go to school!
ReallyUhSharp 2008-05-11 ch 1,	abuseI think this is quite possibly the most cutest thing I've ever read! Little Galinda = adorable. Especially when she wanted to cry when Elphaba looked dejected :') So same goes for litle Elphaba. Poor green thing :'( Write more? alerts xD
0xRENTxOZxHeadx0 2008-05-04 ch 1,	abuseI like it... it's good. I can't wait to see where it's going, so update soon!
Crazy Homeschooler 2008-05-03 ch 1,	abuseI don't like. I LOVE! So awesome! Please update soon! I need to know what happens next. Poor Elphaba. You did such a good job keeping everyone in character! Thank you!
Holly 2008-05-03 ch 1, anon.	abuseAww, I love it so far. Poor Elphaba. Please continue it

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