Kagome, jealous? Just maybe... lol. She sure seems pretty upset that Inuyasha was partnered with another woman...

I love the story. You're doing some great things with it. I can't wait to read some more!

WOOT WOOT...waitin' for the next chappie

Sorry that this is such a LATE review, but I really wanted to comment on this chapter before the next one came out. I actually liked this chapter and thought that it was actually review relevent to the story. I mean we finally get the realization that Naraku is still just as big a jerk in this story as he is in Canon Inuyasha. I mean I always had a feeling that Naraku in this story was too good to be true but this chapter proved it for me.
Also I liked the parts with Sesshomaru and the council was very interesting. Its hard to see Sesshomaru bow down to anyone especially a group of people who he can't see, but he definately doesn't do it without a bit of ... malice in his thoughts lol. Are any of them going to be revelled to us? Some of them see kinda familar just from there actions, but they could just be people that you made up for this story. I don't know.
Yeah!! I'm so excited that were finally gonna see some more Kagome and Inuyasha in either the next chapter or the following chapter. I've been going through Kagome/Inuyasha withdrawal. I also get the feeling that things are going to start revealing themselves about why Kagome and inuyasha are so important in this story (besides them being the main characters lol). I look forward to the next update as always and once again...sorry for the late review.

omg this is great. i luv how this is goin even though the chapter was short it was good. i can't wait for the next chapter. ") happy late v-day ^_^

so, now that naraku has been found to be a traitor and has impersonated sesshoumaru, the fun can begin. setting inuyasha and kagome up to be ambushed was a perfectly naraku-esque machination. he can be so much fun to write.

i can't wait for more interaction between inuyasha and kagome. you seem to capture them so well. another great chapter for a wonderful story.

Yeah, finally some back ground on kagome. This was a good chpater in that it gives you insight into how kagome feels about everything that is going on around her, and about the people she cares about. She is definately different in this story. The Kagome from Inuyasha would not have fought a war like this with such bitterness in her heart. of course her upbringing and the type of wrold she's living in helped to shape that. I like the idea of Kagome being brought up by her Dad instead of her mom and grampa, it adds a new inner conflict to the story. After all being raised by a male is much different from being raised by a another woman.

Also does Kikyo suspect that Tsubaki is a double agent, or does she just not really like her even though the two of them seem to share information alot, or am I just missing something all together? Anyway I look forward to the next chapter. Thanks for the update!

hmm i just wonder who's the roalty thats been lost for years. Update soon!

Sorry it took so long to review this chapter, I was having computer troubles. I’m glad you updated the story and gave a small incite into the order of the three and what’s going on. Though I’m still a little clueless on what the three treasures and more importantly what the order of three is after. I mean from the content of this chapter its obvious that the order is looking for the three treasures and the heir to the throne in order to most likely kill them, but why? What is their motive? Did Magatsuhi betray the emperor because he wanted to be king, because he is just evil like in the manga, or a deeper motive? I’m sure you won’t say though because I’m sure it’ll come later in your story.

Its obvious through your hinting that Inuyasha and kagome play an important role in defeating or ‘interacting’ (I couldn’t think of a better word) with the order of three. I can’t wait to see how that plays out.

Also, its something I noticed in this chapter but when I think about it I’ve noticed in other chapters, Sesshomaru is a lot nicer to Inuyasha in this story than in the anime/manga even though if I remember right that Sesshomaru wasn’t always so nice. Does he feel guilty or something or is he just using Inuyasha to get what is needed for the youkai’s? Just something I was wondering about. Please update soon.

great story! i cant wait for the next chapter!

this was great hope u update fast.

hmm i wonder where kagome plays into all of this. UPDATE AGAIN SOON PLEASE!

i just found this story. i've finally caught up to you, and wanted to let you know how much i'm enjoying it. your writing stly is smooth and easy to read. the characters have so much personality. this story is a joy to read. i can only assume at this point the rin will prove to be the descendant that they are searching for. does sesshoumaru know who she really is? i'll wait anxiously to find out.

I'm really happy your finally going to explain things in the next chapter. This story is really good but really vague. I know its meant to be that way to keep the plot from being disclosed in the first couple of chapters but I really want to know whats going on. Is kagome going to get more screen time in the next couple of chapters because it feels like we've focused more on inuyasha and his devolopment? Though I kinda knew from the beginning that tsubaki was an enemy, i was surprised at first she was with the good miko's but now its starting to make sense, unless you do a double reverse where the fake mirror was surposed to me a trick in the first place because she's acting as a double spy. I could see that too. Both are totally plausible to me. Thanks for updating this story. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

yay now we get to know ab the order update soon!

Nice! I love it!