Check speeling and elaborate. good job tho.

that was cute! i loved the ending, episode 24 should have ended like that :)

Hmmm...Kaworu no die? Joy!

Aha. While I'm a huge Kaworu/Shinji fan, I can't agree with your ending. Shinji just doesn't have the guts to do something like that.

O.O I LOVE THIS ONE SO MUCH! If only it could've relly ended this way...*sniff sniff*

I think that this would have made a better ending for

episode 24. Very cool story. I was wondering if you

might consider doing a sequel. What would Shinji and

Kaoru do after Eva and Nerv? Ja ne :)