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Miss Rosalie Hale 818 2008-06-03 ch 2,	abuseplease carry on - wow your stories are great!
capn2 2008-05-30 ch 2,	abuseLove it. Please update soon!
Elektra107 2008-05-20 ch 2,	abuseI love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Dusk11 2008-05-14 ch 2,	abuseThose two are just cute together :-) I hope you'll have the next chappies finished soon.
fifespice 2008-05-11 ch 2,	abuseso do they know quirrell has voldie on the back of his head then? and harrya dnd raco are so cute
cyiusblack 2008-05-09 ch 2,	abuseupdate soon
EriKaBalDeL 2008-05-09 ch 2,	abusei think you write it Quirrel or with just one 'r' but it's with an 'e' not an 'a'.. hmm, did you notice you didn't actually answer me about the part that harry isn't really bella's flesh and blood? and if you did mentioned rodulf was imprisoned and/or kissed i didn't remember it sorry.. there is something i'm not sure i realized right.. was it that harry's brother[what'sisname?] is the boy who lived for real or is it a mistake in the identity?[cause you said that it is the brother with the scar..] narccisa is a perv! just so you know it.. hmm, never thought luci as a man without prejudice on something.. i was going to ask you how is it he doesn't have any problems with them behing so cuddly and cute like bears dolls, that is until i saw you wrote he was never going to admit to it.. why the need for marriage contract[?]? if they fall inlove with each other or until they realize that they are[ about two more days by the way things are going..] they will want to marry and be with one another regardless.. no need for papers this early, right? it's just that it's hard to get used to it all, i mean, suddenly you come to think of these people as nice, and now you also have to realize they pretty normal people when they're away from the world, they don't actually have dark satan ceremonies at midnight, they don't sacrifice vergins and all that they just think they're better from some people and that's all to it.. [which will make it easier to get used to it.. good job!] what if harry and dray will be in different houses? i mean, harry isn't all that cunning now, he doesn't have voldie's characters anymore, and he is way too cute for the house of snakes? will it be possible for him to be a griff? maybe even dray in griff, i mean, you said they din't like quirrel.. and no matter what were their upbrings, i just can't see harry as one of voldies servants, no matter what you say, i can't picture it!.. please make them griffs.. i donnu, maybe this way they will even start to come out from that stupid blood prejudice.. which reminds me, luci went to ask for a room for his son and nefhew[gosh you don't know how funny that sentence sounded in my head right now, he went to get them a room.. h], how is he going to present it, 'oi guys, need a favor, my son and nefhew are pretty close, they're in a marriage contract actually and i want to get them their own room here at hogwarts, so sign the damn sheet or i'll burn your houses and give your wifes to demons as slaves!' or what? come on, you said he wasn't going to admit he thinks they're cute together so in the next opportunity he goes and jump right to it and start to work on things? oi, you said in the summery that bella's gonna raise him in the house of black.. but at the time, sirius mom was a live wasn't she? and the house belongs to sirius.. ant technicly[?] bella's a lestrange.. i think that's all, can't remember what i wanted to say in the begining of the chapter sorry[stupid sisters bothering me in the middle and i can't remember what i wanted!!]
kubas89 2008-05-09 ch 2,	abusegood
Sakura Lisel 2008-05-09 ch 1,	abuseI like this story so far, but exactly HOW and WHY did Harry get sent to Dark Wizards to raise, while David got sent to Light Wizards? If Dumbledore's responsible for who the twins wound up being sent to as babies, then what was the old coot thinking?
The French Dark Lord 2008-05-09 ch 2,	abuseWell,Slash aren't usally my cup of tea but the story is well written sofar and intersting,I am most looking forward the dark arts session and Dumby bashing ;) Keep up the good work.
furin-a 2008-05-09 ch 2,	abuseI have alreadyread this in AFF so i would like to add story alert here so i can know when you update. Lol, I love DarkHarry even he isn't the real boy who lived!
Korraganitar the NightShado... 2008-05-08 ch 1,	abusei suppose i am a bit dissapointed, not with the writing or the background as that is fine, but with the fact that you are following the pattern of making Harry just as unimaginative as his predeseors when it comes to blood. Better to manipulate every strong wittch or wizard they find, regardless of blood, instead of makeing enemies in such an unsubtle way=(. Should be interesting to see more though. ~Korrag
EriKaBalDeL 2008-05-08 ch 1,	abuseoh i hate it when harry is evil.. and i just don't understand why ever will he be placed with the lestrange family even though clear of charges as was "found" and his brother, his twin with the weasleys, or anyone else, why seperate them? and the thing that really struk[?] me, bella, a loving mother to her child? somehow i can't see it, it's upsetting, really..
kubas89 2008-05-07 ch 1,	abusegood :D
fifespice 2008-05-03 ch 1,	abusei liked this harry still has brother wand but hes not boy who lived? so does he still have parseltounge abilities? and if hes not boy who lived whes he still have holly wand? im a curious sort lol please update soon

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