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| Fluffy's fangirls 2008-07-20 ch 4,  | abuseThis is an awesome story and I cannot wait for more! |
| grimnessreaper 2008-07-20 ch 4, | abusethe twins should've stayed in the cave. then they would've been found already. but now glorfindel has to find the men and get the twins back safely and quickly. |
| Lady Ambreanna 2008-07-20 ch 4, | abuseOut of the frying pan and into the fire! But isn't that how it always is with the twins? Thanks for the chapter! |
| grimnessreaper 2008-05-18 ch 3, | abusegreat. at last someones looking for the twins now. |
| Frodo's sister 2008-05-17 ch 3, | abuseGood story. I Hope they find the young elves soon. |
| Lady Ambreanna 2008-05-17 ch 3, | abuseI feel sorry for everyone. Glorfindel and the warriors, who know the twins are in trouble, Elrond, who is worried about the twins being in trouble, or the twins who are in trouble now and will be in even bigger trouble once their found! |
| Alaenor-Skybird 2008-05-17 ch 1, | abuseIt has some potential, but it's very confusing and has a lot of errors. I agree with Akyrial. You need a beta. Badly. |
| Lady Akyrial 2008-05-17 ch 3, | abuseYou need a Beta. Whereas the story line seems to be good, the grammar is ruining the readability and takes the enjoyment away. I enjoy these back slices of life, but find that this one is hard to follow. Also, make you chapters a bit longer. Even though you may have two typed pages on your computer, this is very short for Fanfiction if it is going to be a full story. |
| grimnessreaper 2008-05-16 ch 2, | abusethose poor boys. i hope they get found soon. (and alive) |
| Elfinabottle 2008-05-10 ch 2, | abuseThey are proving to be quite resourceful, but I still hope they are found quickly. Looking forward to more. |
| Lady Ambreanna 2008-05-10 ch 2, | abuseI don't envy them either! Nice chapter! Thanks for the update! |
| Lady Ambreanna 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseWhen Elrond finds out what happened(Elrond ALWAYS finds out) the twins won't be seeing daylight for a month! Glad to see a new story! |
| Lady Akyrial 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseThis has great potential. I like the beginning, and with the exception of a minor typo and grammar error "sited" it was good. |
| Elfinabottle 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseVery nice start, with quite a bit of adventure. I don't believe Elrond will be too happy with them, but I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |