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| Anawey 2008-06-14 ch 1, | abuseAw! I loved the end. That was sweet, he get's to be with Katara again. |
| asylem29 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseit's beautiful forgive my lack of words...but i find it hard to express the satisfaction and happiness i have... if i were to die, i would also think of a loved one and the memories we shared. i'd love to see zuko and katara in the flashbacks you wrote. it's beautiful |
| Jewely2951 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. :) It was cute. But yes, it was just as chessey as it sounded from the summary. lol. :D Still good though. :) |
| solarecilpse 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseI Like. It's surprising i even read it. For some reason, i'm very averse to 1st person narrative. I usually click out of it right away - as soon as I see that the 1st letter starting off the story is the letter 'I'. My hand moves so fast that i think i never went of the archive page in the first place. Anyway why do you people insist that the first child Zuko and Katara would have, should they have, be a girl, because i strongly oppose that belief - someone of Zuko's line predominantly produces males and for both Katara and Zuko's circumstance their parents had a MALE 1st then a daughter. [sighs and shakes head bemusedely] Please ignore my tirade if it comes accross too strong and insulting because that is not my intent, truely.(that 1st-born thing about them always being a girl probably attributes with the writers being female, girl babies being adorable and cute and sweetand emboding everything innocent more so than a boy baby, among other theories i don't want to get into) But this story, though it carries two things i don't usually like to see in a fanfic, is one which i believe i'd read over again for some time to come. Keep up the brilliant work. Still loving it ! |
| Serenityofthematrix 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseWow this was really nice. It was sweet and sad at the same time. |
| Dragon Jadefire 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseIt was beautiful. |
| Zutaraness 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abusewow that was amazing. very very heartfelt, i loved it, best one-shot ive read in ages, it was like a sad kind of happy, bittersweet almost. i got all teary reading. keep up the good work. |
| Harlequin Jade 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseSo sad... But very sweet at the same time... I like it! nice job! |
| Phoenix Wingz 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseNice story XD. |
| midnightoasis 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely done. Not overly sentimental and still quite touching. Some of the dialogue was a bit archaic, but I really enjoyed this. :-) |
| Thawn716 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseAh sad, oh well it was a nice little recollection but Zuko's proposal was how shall we say...different. |
| sdf 2008-05-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was very well written |
| EndlessBlack 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abusethat was really cute, i loved it. |
| little blueness 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is really pretty, although sad. But at least he died happy. I liked it. |
| Jaeeton 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseThat was amazing. It was beautiful and sad and just wonderful. I loved it. |