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Reviews For: The Setting Sun

Anawey
2008-06-14
ch 1,
abuseAw! I loved the end. That was sweet, he get's to be with Katara again.
asylem29
2008-05-06
ch 1,
abuseit's beautiful

forgive my lack of words...but i find it hard to express the satisfaction and happiness i have...

if i were to die, i would also think of a loved one and the memories we shared. i'd love to see zuko and katara in the flashbacks you wrote.

it's beautiful
Jewely2951
2008-05-04
ch 1,
abuseI liked it. :) It was cute. But yes, it was just as chessey as it sounded from the summary. lol. :D Still good though. :)
solarecilpse
2008-05-03
ch 1,
abuseI Like.

It's surprising i even read it. For some reason, i'm very averse to 1st person narrative. I usually click out of it right away - as soon as I see that the 1st letter starting off the story is the letter 'I'. My hand moves so fast that i think i never went of the archive page in the first place.

Anyway why do you people insist that the first child Zuko and Katara would have, should they have, be a girl, because i strongly oppose that belief - someone of Zuko's line predominantly produces males and for both Katara and Zuko's circumstance their parents had a MALE 1st then a daughter.

[sighs and shakes head bemusedely] Please ignore my tirade if it comes accross too strong and insulting because that is not my intent, truely.(that 1st-born thing about them always being a girl probably attributes with the writers being female, girl babies being adorable and cute and sweetand emboding everything innocent more so than a boy baby, among other theories i don't want to get into)

But this story, though it carries two things i don't usually like to see in a fanfic, is one which i believe i'd read over again for some time to come.

Keep up the brilliant work. Still loving it !
Serenityofthematrix
2008-05-03
ch 1,
abuseWow this was really nice. It was sweet and sad at the same time.
Dragon Jadefire
2008-05-03
ch 1,
abuseIt was beautiful.
Zutaraness
2008-05-03
ch 1,
abusewow that was amazing. very very heartfelt, i loved it, best one-shot ive read in ages, it was like a sad kind of happy, bittersweet almost. i got all teary reading. keep up the good work.
Harlequin Jade
2008-05-03
ch 1,
abuseSo sad... But very sweet at the same time... I like it! nice job!
Phoenix Wingz
2008-05-03
ch 1,
abuseNice story XD.
midnightoasis
2008-05-03
ch 1,
abuseVery nicely done. Not overly sentimental and still quite touching. Some of the dialogue was a bit archaic, but I really enjoyed this. :-)
Thawn716
2008-05-03
ch 1,
abuseAh sad, oh well it was a nice little recollection but Zuko's proposal was how shall we say...different.
sdf
2008-05-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis was very well written
EndlessBlack
2008-05-03
ch 1,
abusethat was really cute, i loved it.
little blueness
2008-05-03
ch 1,
abuseThis is really pretty, although sad. But at least he died happy. I liked it.
Jaeeton
2008-05-03
ch 1,
abuseThat was amazing. It was beautiful and sad and just wonderful. I loved it.
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