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Leta McGotor
2008-05-08
ch 1,
abuseHey there. I'm sorry that you are ill. I know how it is to have problems swallowing, so I'm really soorry for you.
But I like your ficlet. It's amazing how much you can show with such a small amount of words. Really fantastic.
And I can imagine Severus' shock finding out about his daughter - great idea.

Leta McGotor
Mania4ka
2008-05-03
ch 1,
abuseI cannot say that I quite like Minerva/Severus thing, but this story is rather nice. So I enjoyed it)
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