I really enjoyed this little story. Don't know what else to say except, THANKS!

I really love this. Your style is simple, but it effectively conveys all the emotions the characters are feeling.

The last scene was just...I really have no words for it. I can see Roslin doing just that.

I hope you write more.

Gabe

I loved all these firsts. They were lovely little vignettes showing a perfect progression. Thanks for posting!