That's really sad. I can't imagine just fading from existence - being there, but not existing in other people's lives anymore. Poor Dawn. It was very subtle and well written though, good job. :)

Ah, i get it!

Dawn ran away and when Nick woke up he didn't remember her, right?

Lovely story and very subtle.

It made me sad in a happy way.

Plus I'm the first reviewer! So i'm double happy!